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CONFLICT OF INTEREST
By Marios Christodoulou

GENRE: Drama
LOGLINE: Sylvia is a career orientated woman who decides to abort her unborn child, a result of a one night stand. Things don't go according to plan though when the doctor about to perform the operation turns out to be the father of her child. Who is the woman walking in the rain? Who is the male figure lurking around the dark corners of the clinic? Are they connected to Sylvia in any way?
Eric Ian Steele

Again, similar to my other comments. Try giving away the mystery about the stranger and the other woman. Sounds like Sylvia is tthe protagonist, but who is her opponent? What genre is this? Sounds like it could be a romcom with the outrageous coincidence of meeting the doctor. But thenit sounds like a mystery also. I feel like there is lots to this idea, but you need to get to the meat of it in about 25 words. It's a very interesting idea, though.

Marios Christodoulou
@Eric Ian Steele

Found it now. Lol. See message sent. This script is a drama with elements of supernatural. I was a finalist with it in a national competition. I have recently completed the 2nd draft and started re-distributing it.

Eric Ian Steele
@Eric Ian Steele

No problem. Best of luck with it.

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