I really like your writing style a lot, but this seems like a weird fetish/fantasy about buttoned-up women who secretly want to be sluts and use the f-bomb.

Well that's an interesting take on it ;-) Was more meant to be someone who has such an ordered life that she takes drastic steps to keep that order in her life. So an empowered woman in charge of her own destiny, who just happens to be a bit mad. And not at all re the sluts piece, I don't subscribe to that 50 Shades point of view, she does nothing more than lure a victim using feminine guile, she does everything on her terms.

This is now filmed!