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A young man desperate to serve his country finally gets his shot — when aliens crash-land at his campsite, ordered to destroy it.
SYNOPSIS:
A rejected army recruit and his friends discover a crashed alien spacecraft on a camping trip. The survivors reveal they are on a mission to destroy a barbaric planet — and that planet is Earth. The friends steal the ship's power cell to buy time, but the alliance shatters, and the woods become a hunting ground. With his friends dying one by one, Nick and his girlfriend Denise make one final desperate play to bring the ship down before it completes its mission. They did it. But at a cost.
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This logline is great! Did you discuss your script with Art Thomas of Main Man Films? Sure do hope so...:-)
Yes, Art is a super nice guy.
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Hey...clever twist! I like this, Eric. Can definitely visualize it as a movie.
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