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THE LOGLINE:
Accident-prone Madonna Ponzi has an office romance with naïve Charlie Syndrome; a clever, ‘less-abled’ friend Greta; a crazy mom, Maggie; an eccentric dad, Roger, and a ‘con-man’ little brother, Enzo, who has a hamster called Terminator Too and a poster of 'Margot Robbie' which has paranormal powers.
THE TAGLINE: “The Beaver Has Landed”
SYNOPSIS:
PONZI'S SCHEMES has lovable flawed characters; Romance Young & Adult; Comedy; Farce; Soapy; Paranormal; Naughty/sexy; Fraud & Crime, hence Police; Ingenious con tricks; OFFICE settings; A bar like CHEERS; Enzo’s High School; A GODFATHER Gotti; Ponzi home is more eccentric BIG BANG THEORY with a bit of MARRIED WITH CHILDREN; Culture US/Scottish/Italian/Other; There will be tragedy; Maggie’s cooking is hilarious as will be Roger’s hobbies. All have ‘career’ & massive Character development. The scope for multiple series is profound. It is a dysfunctional family and confidence-trick Procedural with a family Series Arc.
SERIES ONE EPISODE TITLES:
EPISODE ONE (Pilot) – The Organ Donors; EPISODE TWO – Life’s a Lottery; EPISODE THREE – The Fabulous Four; EPISODE FOUR – Square Slice Baby; EPISODE FIVE – Free Car Wash; EPISODE SIX – War Time Memorabilia; EPISODE SEVEN – The Ouija Board; EPISODE EIGHT – And Terminator Too; EPISODE NINE – Artificial Stupidity; EPISODE TEN - Three D Printing; EPISODE ELEVEN - The Exorcism; EPISODE TWELVE – A Chocolate Fire Guard; EPISODE THIRTEEN – A Three Alarm Fire.