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DISQUIET BAR
By Charmane Wedderburn

GENRE: Thriller / Suspense
LOGLINE: When a former martial-arts champion’s daughter is abducted by the crime lord he once fought for, he must descend through Marseille’s neon-soaked underworld to expose a criminal empire built on violence, silence, and the ghosts of his past.

SYNOPSIS:

After leaving the underground fight world behind, Rick Young now runs a quiet dojo in Marseille, raising his young daughter and trying to outrun the violence that shaped him. But when a manila envelope appears on his doorstep containing surveillance photos of his child, Rick is dragged back into the brutal circuit run by the Broker, a crime boss who once owned him. Forced to fight for Sara’s safety, Rick enters a spiral of rigged bouts, corrupt cops, human-trafficking rings, and a global betting syndicate streaming violence from a nightclub called the Disquiet Bar. When Sara is kidnapped, Rick joins with a lone honest detective to expose the entire network. It all ends in a rain-soaked showdown on the docks — one final fight broadcast to the world — where Rick turns the Broker’s empire into a confession. Sara survives. Rick vanishes. In Marseille, redemption costs blood — and silence is never peace.

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