I like the concept and title, Charmane Wedderburn! I can see this movie being a hit! I think you have a solid logline except for the end. I suggest explaining what the possible catastrophe is.

I appreciate you taking the time to provide that feedback, Maurice!

Thank you, Tasha!

Glad to, Charmane Wedderburn.

Thank you, Arthur!

Thank you, Nelda!

Thank you, Nathaniel!

Thank you, Michael Dzurak!

Charmane Wedderburn, your logline does a solid job of establishing the inciting incident, the setting (Jamaica), and the emotional arc of the protagonist, touching on themes of self-discovery, friendship, and romance. However, it could be stronger with more specificity. What makes this trip to Jamaica unique or different from similar narratives? What kind of “possible catastrophe” looms? If that element was clarified, the stakes would feel more immediate and compelling. Overall, it’s a promising setup for a feel-good, transformational story, but it could benefit from a sharper hook to stand out.

Hi Ashley Renee Smith, hope you're doing well! I appreciate your constructive feedback on my logline. Insights like yours help me grow and improve. Thank you!