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HANDS OF THE MASTER
By Glen Olson

GENRE: Thriller / Suspense
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A five-century secret. A murdered man who won't stay dead. And one FBI agent standing between a dying master and the network hunting his life

When a murdered man vanishes from the morgue with no fingerprints and no past, a reinstated FBI agent uncovers a five-hundred-year-old secret: a Flemish master painter whose portraits keep their subjects alive — and a network of the near-immortal now being hunted down one destroyed canvas at a time. To stop the killings, he must protect the dying man whose death would end them all.

The Hook in One Line

The Da Vinci Code meets Highlander — a procedural conspiracy thriller where the MacGuffin is a portrait, and the portrait is a human life.

SYNOPSIS:

FBI Special Agent KEVIN STEWERT — a surfer and recent professional casualty, freshly reinstated at the Los Angeles field office — is handed a case as a pointed insult: a body has vanished from the county morgue, signed out at midnight by a funeral home that does not exist. A missing body isn't federal jurisdiction. Kevin takes it anyway.

The dead man, CHARLES MANFRED, has no fingerprints on file, no records of any kind, and a burned mansion in Palos Verdes where the arson targeted a single room and left priceless art untouched. As Kevin pulls the thread, the anomalies multiply: a Homeland Security wall around a partial print, a shredded name in Manfred's office, and a trail that leads to RAOUL SPINOZA — a multigenerational Spanish arms dealer who launders stolen art and burns collections across two continents.

What Kevin cannot yet see is the truth waiting in the South of France. In a villa above Bandol, a frail old man walks the garden each morning. He is PIETER BRUEGEL THE ELDER — the sixteenth-century Flemish master — alive after five centuries. His gift, born of a midwife's sympathetic magic, binds subject to portrait: while the painting exists, the subject lives and regenerates. These long-lived souls are the GRAYS, and for centuries they organized themselves to protect the Master and their own portraits in secret.

Now the Master is failing — and his fierce protector, NING, believes the Grays are draining him. She has begun destroying their portraits to reclaim his life force. She is catastrophically wrong: every portrait she burns kills a person and accelerates the Master's decline. As the body count rises, Kevin joins forces with CDC epidemiologist DR. ELENA MARTINEZ, who has independently tracked impossible longevity in mortality data, and with two Grays themselves — Ning and the ancient NSA operative STANLEY DOLLARHIDE — after Spinoza's mercenaries turn the investigation into open warfare.

The uneasy alliance flies to France to protect the Master at the source, only to be surrounded at the villa by Spinoza's contractors. In the tunnels beneath the estate, Stanley makes the call that saves the others: he draws the enemy commander off the hill and up into the limestone, buying the escape with his own body. The Master is smuggled out by sea; Ning surrenders on her own terms, trading airtight testimony against Spinoza for the disappearance of everyone she loves.

One year later, nine of the eleven remaining Grays have survived the Master's quiet death. Stanley — of course — walked away from the coast road before the paperwork was done. Kevin now runs an International Art Crime Division that investigates cases that look like theft on paper and are something far older underneath. He keeps a charcoal sketch locked in a lead-lined case: Ning's own gift, inherited from her father, waiting for the day she's out. The thread continues.

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The hook line seems a nice touch.

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