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MORTER

MORTER
By Miles Broadhead

GENRE: Drama
LOGLINE:

A 19-year-old comic artist travels to Las Vegas for a life-changing award, but when his self-absorbed brother and doubtful best friend turn the trip into a distraction, he’s forced to choose between their approval and his own future.

SYNOPSIS:

Mikey Barrett is a shy 19-year-old comic strip artist who has spent most of his life seeking validation from the people closest to him. When he finally opens a long-overdue letter, he discovers he has been named a finalist in a prestigious competition, one that could launch his career. The ceremony is in Las Vegas, and it is happening now.

Erica, a thoughtful new friend who genuinely sees his potential, offers to take him. Before he can accept, Mikey’s older brother Johnny, who is well-meaning but self-absorbed, and his best friend Jordan insist on coming, turning the trip into a spontaneous Vegas getaway. True to form, Mikey goes along with it, reluctant to disappoint them.

Over the course of less than 48 hours, the trip spirals into a blur of partying and excess. As Johnny and Jordan chase their own version of fun, Mikey quietly struggles to stay focused on the moment that matters most. For the first time, he begins setting small boundaries, pushing back, asking for space, and trying to prioritize himself, but each attempt is dismissed, ignored, or undermined.

What Mikey once saw as loyalty becomes something else entirely. They do not take him seriously. They do not see the artist he is becoming, only the version of him who keeps the peace and asks for nothing.

When Mikey wins the award, the moment brings clarity instead of celebration. In a raw confrontation, he finally stops accommodating the people who cannot grow with him, severing ties in a moment that is both painful and freeing.

Alone in a city built on noise and illusion, Mikey reconnects with Erica, someone who has seen him clearly from the start. In choosing to move forward, Mikey begins to embrace not just his future, but his voice, no longer defined by the need to be liked, but by the courage to be understood.

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