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MR. PRIVATE EYE

MR. PRIVATE EYE
By Mike García

GENRE: Thriller / Suspense
LOGLINE:

In snow-blanketed New York just before Christmas, a burned-out,
disgraced ex-cop scraping by as a low-rent private eye takes on what
appears to be a simple missing-person case for a captivating French
student, only to uncover a ruthless exotic-animal trafficking
ring—fighting dirty in back alleys and confronting his smug former
colleague—while quietly falling for his client and sacrificing his own
chance at happiness to deliver her joyful reunion.

SYNOPSIS:

In the cold, glittering heart of New York City just days before Christmas, Shawn Roper, a 35-year-old former NYPD detective turned disgraced, broke, and bitterly self-loathing private eye, ekes out a living in a rundown East Harlem office/apartment solving lost-pet cases and infidelity stakeouts. Once a promising cop, Shawn’s career ended in disgrace after a rushed decision sent an innocent man to prison and let the real criminal walk free. Haunted by guilt and shunned by his former colleagues—especially the smug Inspector Clinton Bronson—he has given up on ever being a real hero again. Everything changes on December 19 when Brigitte Marceau, a radiant 20-year-old French exchange student at NYU, walks into his office seeking help finding her missing boyfriend, Aaron Rodney. She offers every dollar she has saved, along with Aaron’s small white dog, Kobe, who Aaron left in her care right before he vanished. Despite his cynicism and belief that Aaron simply ghosted her, Shawn—desperate for money and unexpectedly moved by Brigitte’s sincerity and beauty—takes the case. What begins as a routine missing-person job quickly spirals into something far darker. Shawn discovers Aaron was an investigative blogger secretly exposing an illegal exotic-animal trafficking ring operating out of a seemingly innocent Brooklyn pet store. The apartment searches, the break-in at Brigitte’s dorm, and the brutal subway ambush on Shawn all point to the same thing: someone is hunting for the damning evidence Aaron hid… inside Kobe’s collar. As the investigation intensifies, Shawn and Brigitte grow closer. She moves into his cramped apartment for safety, and the two share quiet, tender nights filled with unspoken longing. Shawn, who has long convinced himself he doesn’t deserve love or redemption, finds himself falling for her—knowing she belongs to Aaron. The climax explodes in a violent, desperate confrontation at the pet store. Shawn fights dirty and barely wins against armed traffickers, while Brigitte discovers Aaron alive but imprisoned in a back room. The evidence—hidden in Kobe’s collar—is recovered, the ring is busted, and Aaron is saved. But victory comes at a personal cost. Inspector Bronson arrives on scene and claims the credit, while Shawn quietly steps back. Brigitte and Aaron reunite in tears and joy. Shawn watches from the sidelines as the woman he has come to love walks away with the man she was always meant to be with.

On Christmas Eve, alone in his dim office with cold pizza and Kobe curled beside him, Shawn scrolls through social media and sees Brigitte and Aaron celebrating together—happy, safe, in love. A text from Brigitte arrives: simple thanks and a Merry Christmas. Shawn stares at it, smiles sadly, and whispers “Merry Christmas” to the empty room. In the end, Shawn solves the case that could have rebuilt his reputation, saves the woman he loves, and gives her the Christmas miracle she asked for… but he remains exactly where he started: a lonely private eye in a shabby office, still waiting for the redemption he believes he’ll never earn. A bittersweet, character-driven noir holiday tale about second chances—for everyone except the man who made them possible.

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