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In a post-apocalyptic world ruled by a demonic empire, an immortal warrior storms Babylon to rescue his daughter, but after becoming the vessel of Legion, he must endure divine judgment and survive a cosmic war between Heaven and Hell to set God’s people free.
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The Ghost of Ashes is a mythic sci-fi biblical action epic set in a ruined future ruled by Babylon, a demonic empire built on corrupted technology and spiritual control. When his daughter Ophia is trapped inside the infernal city during a mass escape, Jay—an immortal warrior scarred by centuries of suffering—launches a brutal one-man assault to rescue her. But as his attack ignites hope across a dying world, he is overtaken by Legion, a parasitic force that turns him into the battleground for a war between Heaven and Hell. What begins as a rescue mission becomes a story of judgment, redemption, fatherhood, and the fight to reclaim what is still holy in a fallen world.
Hi guys new here. Thoughts would be cool, it reads like a hybrid script. Part commercial spec, part cinematic visual document. Have a good read. Thx.