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LA HAMBURGUESA, ACA THE HAMBURGER REGISTER NUMBER: 00 / 2025 / 3818
By Vesna Floric
A 10- YEARS-OLD GIRL KILLS HER 6-YEARS-OLD BROTHER OVER A HAMBURGER.
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Hey, this is a bold, attention-grabbing concept with strong emotional weight.
You might want to hint at the why behind the incident adding a bit of deeper conflict would make it more impactful.
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