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In a world of yellow-gray skies, a young man, who has the ability to fly, must master his god-like
control over thunder and magnetism to save his birthplace from a
grotesque cult and their army of mosquito-like airships.
SYNOPSIS:
PROJECT STATUS: FEATURE FILM ADAPTATIONBased on the published novel "Gandolf The Skysurfer of the West" by Jim d'Orange_byTC.ISBN: 9781837949991.Seeking: Production Partners / Producers / Screenwriters.
SYNOPSIS: GANDOLF – THE SKYSURFER OF THE WEST
GENRE: Sci-Fi / Surreal Fantasy / Action
LOGLINE:
In a world of yellow-gray skies, a young man, who has the ability to fly, must master his god-like
control over thunder and magnetism to save his birthplace from a
grotesque cult and their army of mosquito-like airships.
THE STORY:
In the heat-soaked, dystopian canyons of Cavetown, the sky is a permanent
shade of yellow-gray. GANDOLF, a teenager born in the peaceful West
Valley High, has the rare gift of flight and discovers he possesses
dormant elemental powers:to summon ball lightning, steer the weather, and manipulate magnetic
fields. His only escape from the harsh reality is his Magna-board, a
gravity-defying surfboard that allows him to dance through the clouds.The peace is shattered when the Dark Religion, led by the sinister HIGH
PRIEST NAR, infiltrates the valley. Nar’s goal is total spiritual and physical
enslavement, enforced by a legion of fanatical followers known as the
Blackbowlers—small men, with white faces and black painted eyes, who
wear black bowler hats with a mysterious magnetic stone hidden beneath
the brim.Joined by the cynical warrior ROBIN and his loyal friend RANDOLF, Gandolf
embraces his destiny as the 'Skysurfer of the West'.
The rebellion leads them deep into the earth. In a heart-pounding
climax, Gandolf executes a high-speed dive on his Magna-board into a
jagged cavern, navigating a dark tunnel to reach the heart of the Dark
Temple. There, the trio successfully blows up Nar in his own sanctuary.However, the nightmare isn't over. As they return to West Valley High, a
grotesque, circus-like spectacle awaits. Huge, twisted balloons descend
from mosquito-like airships, carrying hundreds of Blackbowlers to launch a final, desperate assault on Gandolf’s home.In a breathtaking display of power, Gandolf takes to the sky. He summons
massive ball lightnings that obliterate the airships in mid-air. For the
ground troops, he orchestrates a brilliant tactical strike: using a
cloud of 30cm silver ball-tip needles
provided by Robin, Gandolf uses his mastery of magnetism to turn the
atmosphere into a weapon. He launches the needles downwards towards the
valley, because of the magnetic stones in their hats,
the needles are pulled downward at lethal speeds, piercing the
Blackbowlers in a synchronized storm of silver.With the airships burning like bombed-out pirate ships and the cult defeated, Gandolf stands as the
protector of life and freedom, proving that the spirit of the West Valley cannot be broken.
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