THE STAGE 32 LOGLINES

Post your loglines. Get and give feedback.

THE SECRET OF DUBAI – AL-HAMDAN SAGA
By Ana Rodrigues

GENRE: Thriller / Suspense, Family, Drama
LOGLINE: Introduces Isabella Al-Hamdan, the Al-Hamdan family, and the beginnings of an international conspiracy threatening the empire.

SYNOPSIS:

Introduces Isabella Al-Hamdan, the Al-Hamdan family, and the beginnings of an international conspiracy threatening the empire.

Ana Rodrigues

Rated this logline

Robyn Henderson

Rated this logline

Tasha Lewis 2

Rated this logline

Kakha Beridze

Rated this logline

Arthur Charpentier

Rated this logline

Minh Nguyen

Rated this logline

Seventy

Rated this logline

Seventy

Hi, Ana! Congratulations on the project. The title is powerful, and the Drama/Thriller genre has massive market appeal on Stage 32, immediately bringing to mind high-stakes international productions.

To make the synopsis a 5-star hook, I'd suggest focusing a bit more on Isabella’s active role. What is her specific driving force within this conspiracy? Is she trying to save the family empire, or is she caught in the crossfire? Giving the audience a clearer picture of her personal stakes and the central conflict will make it irresistible to producers. Wishing you the best of luck with the saga!

Best Regards

- Seventy

register for stage 32 Register / Log In