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THE TEMPORALS S1 : CHRONO-PULSE
By Brially-Michaël MÉfumes

GENRE: Thriller / Suspense, Science Fiction
LOGLINE: Logline Five college students discover Mayan artifacts capable of manipulating time, but every second stolen from destiny brings them closer to à ravenous spectral entity and a shadow government agency determined to dissect them.

SYNOPSIS:

Time is not a straight line ; it is a living force that strikes back. In contemporary New York, five students unearth a Mayan stele concealing five watches of extraterrestrial technology. This absolute power quickly becomes a destructive addiction. For every temporal jump, the traveler must cast their own double into a screaming « Shadow Zone. » Hunted by « The Entity »—a sentinel of smoke—and the Obsidian Section, the students spiral into a nightmare where the quest for perfection leads to pure horror. The television series project, THE TEMPORALS, is an ambitious foray into speculative science fiction, fusing elements of psychological thriller, historical drama, and extraterrestrial cosmology. It strives to transcend the traditional tropes of time-travel narratives by introducing the mechanics of « destiny’s vengeance » and a cosmic immune system embodied by The Entity. This bible explores the foundations of this universe, from the ancient origins of an extraterrestrial tribe to the ethical and biological implications faced by five contemporary New York students.

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