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Between Modica's Baroque architecture and Shanghai's vertical sprawl, a Sicilian sound designer and a Brazilian engineer find in each other a connection that makes them face their true selves — and then spend a year searching for every reason not to close the distance.
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The microcosm of Viola — a sound designer searching for the "perfect frequency" within the temporal stasis of Baroque Sicily — is fractured by opposing interferences: just as her grandmother is about to leave her forever, the magnetic Cadu, a Brazilian engineer moving through the hyper-modern skyscrapers of Shanghai, virtually breaks into her life.
His idealized presence, like a digital ghost, becomes a constant reverberation in Viola’s life for nearly a year. During this time, she is forced to confront questions she had long tried to bury: the nature of desire through the lens of her asexuality, and the sustainability of a love — or the mere idea of it — that survives only in a limbo of bits and time zones.
Blue Ticks on Mute is a sensory exploration of the sense of self and the mystery of human incommunicability mediated by the digital bubble. Through a subtle progression of consequences dictated by non-choices, Viola and Cadu force each other to look into a mirror that refuses to hide the darkest sides of their egos, revealing that digital alienation is merely a vessel in which we drown our millennial loneliness.
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I really like the concept. The contrast between Sicily and Shanghai is great visually, and the idea of Viola searching for the perfect frequency in both sound and relationships is beautifully aligned. I also think the asexual perspective is a really interesting angle and fits well with the theme of alienation.
Reading the logline, I wondered if it might undersell some of the things that make the synopsis so intriguing. The Sicily/Shanghai contrast especially creates strong imagery, and the theme of digital miscommunication comes through very clearly in the synopsis but a bit less in the logline. The phrase “digital limbo” is poetic, but I found myself curious what that looks like in practice. Bringing a hint of that into the logline might make it even more compelling.
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Sounds interesting Adriana! Yes, to reflect the nature of human relationships in the digital world can be challenging in a film if you want to stay true to a vision which probably originated for a book format. Please keep me posted about your work!
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Great work
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