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AFTER THE BURIAL (IN CURRENT DEVELOPEMENT)
By Marc Llorens

GENRE: Science Fiction, Horror
LOGLINE:

Months after his daughter’s funeral, a grieving police inspector discovers her alive

within a metallic reflection—and must use a botched 1962 experiment to rescue
her from a sentient dimension of static.

SYNOPSIS:

Miles (42), a stoic police inspector in the damp town of Crowmarsh, is a

man hollowed out by grief. Two months after burying his daughter, Zoe, his

reality fractures when he catches a flicker of movement in the metallic

reflection of a fire extinguisher sign in his hallway. It is Zoe—alive, pleading,

and trapped on the other side of the silvered glass.

What starts as a suspected psychotic break evolves into a clandestine

investigation. Miles enlists Mr. Huxley, a sidelined physics teacher, who

decodes a terrifying truth: the sign is a "thin spot" in reality, a gateway to

the Nether—a collapsing dimension born from a failed 1962 nuclear

experiment. Zoe is being "unmade" by The Signalman, a sentient entity of

static that consumes biological frequencies to sustain its dying world.

Under the shadow of a police intervention led by his own superior, Miles

and Huxley construct a volatile transmitter to bridge the gap. They have

one thirty-minute window to act before a total "static collapse" seals the

doorway forever.

Miles crosses into the neon-streaked, monochrome void of the Nether to

reach Zoe, but the laws of physics demand a toll: the portal cannot close

without a biological anchor to stabilize the rift. In a final act of redemptive

love, Miles forces Zoe and Huxley back to the real world and destroys the

device from the inside. He chooses to stay behind, becoming the eternal

guardian of the silence.

Years later, an adult Zoe passes a reflective sign in a quiet corridor. For a

heartbeat, the static shifts into the familiar silhouette of her father

watching over her. She shares a silent breath of gratitude with the glass

before walking on, leaving the reflection to hold the world together.

Marcos Fizzotti

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