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A fearless, gun-toting street-preacher fights for souls until a violent gang of human traffickers draws him to a fight for his daughter's life.
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112 pages, R-rated, Metro-contained.
In his dimly lit office, a creepy criminal named Rex casually murders a woman.
When Robbie Parker arms himself and walks into a rough neighborhood to preach the gospel, he is soon attacked, but he easily repels the attack with the skill of highly trained fighter.
The next day, we meet his quirky church and his street-wise pastor.
Robbie visits his ex-wife's house unannounced, only to be reminded that she and their 12-year-old daughter Kammy hate him.
Worried about his unbelieving daughter's soul and angry about his ex-wife, Robbie occasionally lashes out in violent (yet hilarious) ways between street-preaching trips, while his stern but compassionate pastor tries to rein him in.
When Robbie preaches outside Rex's night club which is engaged in organized kidnapping, he is met with a subtle threat from Rex.
After rescuing an amusingly socially awkward teenage stoner from a brutal beating, Robbie takes him under his wing. Meanwhile, social rejection leaves Kammy suicidal and vulnerable when a young woman working for Rex's human trafficking gang lures Kammy to the club to be abducted. Their kidnapping attempt is postponed when Robbie sees Kammy, forces his way into the club and gets into a brawl with the bouncers. Robbie later perceives the danger and hides a tracking device in Kammy's favorite jacket.
Rex sends a hitman to kill Robbie, and Kammy is abducted. The tracking device leads Robbie to bases of the gang's operations where Robbie doesn't hesitate to kill anyone who slows him down. As the body count rises, Kammy attempts to escape. Robbie is left unarmed before a weirdly epic battle with Rex. When Robbie finally finds Kammy, she has a surprise that will change their lives.
[I'll post the concept trailer video on my profile. The script is registered with the US copyright office.]
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