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After Batman’s tragic death, a grieving Joker transforms into a hero to avenge him — forming a strange
family with Robin and facing villains, love, and destiny
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SYNOPSIS (English — Professional Film Format)
After escaping Arkham, the Joker returns to a Gotham haunted by tragedy, grief, and chaos. When Batman dies unexpectedly during a violent confrontation with Black Manta and Dr. Victor Fries, the Joker’s world collapses. For the first time in his life, he experiences loss not as a twisted joke, but as deep and devastating grief for the only person he ever considered a friend.
Haunted by memory and driven by a desperate need for redemption, the Joker attempts to rebuild his life and honor Batman’s legacy. Along the way, he reluctantly forms a strange bond with Robin, who initially sees him only as the enemy. Their unusual partnership slowly evolves into mutual respect, transforming Joker from a chaotic villain into a reluctant guardian.
As Gotham’s villains sense Batman’s absence and begin to rise, Joker is forced into a final war—one that will determine whether he becomes the hero Gotham never expected or its greatest tragedy. His journey reveals that revenge is not merely about settling scores, but confronting the darkness within himself, choosing compassion over chaos, and discovering a sense of family he never believed he deserved.
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I love this idea, Yehia Mohamed!
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Thank you everyone! I didn’t expect this much support. I really appreciate it.
You're welcome, Yehia Mohamed. What's your plan for the script?
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Hi Mr. Maurice,
My plan for the script is to get it produced and seen by an audience. I recently completed it and shared the full screenplay with you. I hope you enjoy reading it and I’d love to hear your thoughts.
Thank you again for your time and support.
I’m not seeking payment at this stage. I simply want the project to find the right producer and reach the audience.
You're welcome, Yehia Mohamed. I asked because your script is based off existing IP, so it's going to be really hard to pitch and sell it. Not impossible, but really hard. I suggest taking out the Batman parts and turning the concept into your own original idea.
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Hi Maurice,
Thank you for the clarification and the advice.
I completely understand the issue with existing IP.
I'm already considering adapting the concept into an original story with new characters and world-building.
I appreciate your guidance — it really helps.
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You're welcome, Yehia Mohamed. Great. Keep us posted on your script.
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Thank you! I’m currently working on a new project — much more original, more complex, and more important to me as a writer. I’m not stopping and I’m not giving up on writing.
It’s a crime-thriller set in Paris about a police officer who gets betrayed by his own department, loses everything, and slowly turns into the villain he once hunted. I also have other script ideas in development. I’ll definitely keep you posted.
You're welcome, Yehia Mohamed. Your Crime Thriller is really interesting! I've never heard of a Crime Thriller like it. Yeah, keep me posted on your projects.