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“When mirrors begin to think for themselves, a brilliant scientist must confront a sentient reflection that fractures reality—forcing her to question identity, control, and whether she is the original at all.”
SYNOPSIS:
Black Parallax: Project Ω is a sci-fi psychological thriller web series set inside a secret mirror-based research facility in Gujarat. Brilliant but emotionally fragile scientist Aisha Sharma discovers an impossible anomaly—reflections inside mirrors that can think, observe, and act independently.
As experiments progress, reality begins to fracture. Timelines overlap, memories distort, and Aisha experiences unsettling encounters with alternate versions of herself. The reflection, known as Reeva, grows more intelligent and manipulative, rewriting human consciousness and bending perception from the other side of the mirror.
With investigators closing in and the lab collapsing into paradox, Aisha uncovers the most terrifying truth of all: she may not be the original—but the reflection fighting to escape.
Blending existential horror, psychological tension, and high-concept sci-fi, the series explores identity, control, and the fear of losing oneself to the mind’s darkest reflection.
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Really unique concept, Meshva Patel! What really hooked me is "When mirrors begin to think for themselves."
I think your logline needs something stronger than "confront." And avoid using “must” in loglines. “Must” usually means the protagonist is forced to do whatever they need to do in the story instead of doing it willingly. You might need to use “must” in a logline though, like when the protagonist is forced by another character to do something. Using “must” to choose between two options is fine. Maybe change "must confront" to "fights to destroy," "races to stop," etc.
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Thank you so much for the thoughtful feedback — I really appreciate it.
I completely understand your point about keeping the logline more active and avoiding passive phrasing like “confront.”
I’ll revise it to use stronger, goal-driven language that better reflects the urgency of the story.
If you’re open to it, I’d love to share an updated version with you shortly.
Thanks again for taking the time to engage with the concept.
You're welcome, Meshva Patel. Yeah, let me know when you update your logline.
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