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Six lifelong friends build a company that gradually grows into a powerful structure with both legal and illegal streams of income. Each of them controls a different sector, unaware of the full picture. As money and influence expand, so does pressure from a corrupt state that begins to view the company as a threat rather than a partner. One of the founders secretly develops a complex plan to expose the system. What begins as targeted leaks and financial strikes quickly triggers a chain reaction: economic instability, public division, and street protests that escalate into a nationwide revolution. The situation spirals beyond anyone’s control, while fear, betrayal, and private deals with the authorities fracture the group from within. As the state responds with arrests and eliminations, loyalty gives way to survival. The company’s original bond erodes under pressure, and the struggle shifts from ideology to consequence. With the country pushed to the brink and the revolution no longer belonging to those who initiated it, the story moves toward its final confrontation — forcing its central character to face the true cost of believing that a system can be dismantled without consuming those who challenge it. Similar projects: 1. One battle after another 2. Money house
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It's an amazing story. It would be interesting to see it on the screens. It only requires a clear development and disclosure of all 6 characters.
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I think this could also work (if not better) as a limited series.
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Great idea with a bsg potential!
Marc Serhan. I thought about it, but I preferred the feature.
Max Chigirin, thank you.
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