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Homelander a tragic Superhero who once believed in American values, yet still plays a little corrupt to maintain his brand image and sales and marketing, Falls into darkness when the manipulation of Stillwells come to Limelight, BIlly Butcher and his team with Becca affected by him, set out to destroy supes.
SYNOPSIS:
When I saw the Amazon Prime Web Series, I found High stakes inconsistencies in the characters. These characters were created for the sake of shock value and the Antagonist was I don't know what I am doing, I don't know what I am saying, and I don't know what I believe in character. I felt infuriated. Because The web series was purely built on shock value and obsession towards indecent fantasies. I felt the comic Book was 100 times better than the highly inconsistent Web Series. I certainly did not expect this from people who directed Lois and Clark and Green Hornet. I don't tolerate that much shock value because it feeds the left brain too much, it results in high stakes of cortisol through the shock value. Not everyone will remain as detached as I am.
As for the comic book when I read it the characters felt comparatively consistent in their ground compared to the web series. But I couldn't I just couldn't read the comic book despite being better than the web series, because of the Obsession towards the Indecent fantasies the writer has put. I am not use to tolerating that much obsession. It was madness the writer has implemented.
Ground Work:
Because of which I had to do immense work to ground the characters and also nod almost all the aspects of the original comic book version, because that was still better than the web series. I found Homelander much more nicer compared to the web series but he had all those narcisitic quality. But the Comic Book never really talked about how a tortured kid can become so narcistic there was no definition for his transformation or transition. Like Annikan becoming the Vader. Even Annikan becoming the Lord Vader I find there needs to be immense middle ground episodes which the writers have cut short to first half. The Annikan to Lord Vader transition must have gone to 3 more episodes of the movie series. I have reduced the indecent obsession of the author to the maximum possible, Only where the script requires that level of indecent portrayal, Only where it serves the narrative of the script I have used it. I have also deducted the shock value brutality completely, Only where the script requires that level I have modified in maximum different angles.
Here is the raw draft prepared to make ai tools understand prompted pre-visualization scenes of my script Based on immense ground work to the reality. Blending with the original
I haven't yet drafted it as a formal script, I've written a raw script to screen version
I haven't used the usual INT Scene EXT Scene the usual way. Its a very raw version of my grounded script to screen. I felt raw versions convey something extremely deep. So here is the raw version of my grounded script to screen version. Because when I use ai tools to make a previsualization it only understands scenes
Scene 1: John Gilman is locked in a grilled cage and 2 Vought securities bring him out of the vault and make him sit in the cabin of James Stillwell Vice President of Vought
Scene : 2: Calm and composed James Stillwell is gazing at the glass window when the vought security bring John Gilman to his cabin and make him sit
Scene: 3: John Gilman sits unaware and clueless looking at him and the vought security who are standing behind him. Firmly holding him.
Scene: 4: James Stillwell Says, You see, I, I just took over and its been a lot of pressure and I had no idea what was going on with you. I am really sorry. He shakes his head out of regret The moment I came to know vought is having a test subject for over 18 years and showed the videos of you from little boy to this young charming man here, I couldn't digest the fact that they put you into so much, I mean, I couldn't even imagine the amount of torture you have been through for I don't know for how many years and boy it hurt me a lot to know vought took you as a little boy and put you into so much torture, so I immediately ordered your release the moment I took charge. I don't want you to face any torture ever, I want you to be free.
Scene: 5: John is stunned at his empathy and he stands automatically with respect slowly
Scene: 6: James Stillwell Signs him to sit, Please take your seat feel free. John sits slowly saying I...I...uh, I don't, I don't know what to say sir I...Uh! James Stillwell No you need not say anything, son. I just want you to live your life.
Scene: 7: John is stunned by the word son he looks at him with new found respect. James Stillwell Signs at the door and a woman appears
Scene: 8: James says this is my wife Madelyn Stillwell We wanted to adopt you in our home as our own, like your local guardian, so that you live a normal life like anyone else.
Scene: 9: Madelyn Stillwell extends her warm hands and says Hello John nice to meet you, I'm sorry about the things that happened to you at vought, we were devastated to hear that.
Scene: 10: John slowly gets up extending his arms, and stammers in overwhelming joy, its its its okay ma'am
Scene: 11: Madelyn Stillwell Says Madelyn is fine, James says Yeah and call me James
Scene: 12: James Stillwell Says I have a complementary position for what you been through because of Vought. I am representing you at Vought as Brand Ambassador for Vought Pharmacuticals with a monthly of 1 million dollars. You will be asked to save people representing Vought, a tailor made Superhero suit will be provided to you personally supervised by me.
Scene: 13: John asks why? why would Vought want me to save people? Why would I work for Vought? when its the same place that wrecked my life?
Scene: 14: James walks around calm and composed, saying You have all the rights to ask that question son. Ofcourse it is you who underwent all the unwanted, unecessary torture for like 18 years. He pauses and says, See it is with immense difficulty I have fought Vought to compensate your valuable life as a human being, He sighs then says, somehow Vought believes it can correct its past mess by saving people's life, So I said why don't you use John to help people, Years of being tortured he is someone who truly understands the value of life. There is no body better than John to save life. He is strong, he is powerful, he is admirable, he is everything a nation needs, Plus Vought is a pharmasutical company that also prepares medicines, Vought also does few good things like that you know, so when John saves life more people will be benefited by buying Vought medicines
Scene: 15: John is boosted by the positive words of James he is taking time to let it sync into him and breathes in sudden boost of happiness and taking his own time of pause and asks, What will I be? If I am living my life as normal, and then saving people Then what will I be? James Replies with a pausing smile Homelander, America's most greatest superhero. The man who accepted this world as his home falling from the stars dramatically waving in enthusiasm You are the child of the stars son He holds him with pride A child of a star that vought never recognized and mercilessly tortured for years. A God for Humanity
Scene: 16: John looks at him with high boost of happiness he feels validated, respected and noticed by someone who truly sees him smile slowly dawns in him looking at James Stillwell and his wife Madelyn Stillwell with new found respect
Scene: 17: Montages of designers tailoring a custom made Superhero Suit measuring John Gilman and finally He appears walking outside in Homelander Suit with a smile.
Scene: 18: Homelander flies from Vought and saves by catching people falling from the building and gains immense crowd gathering and huge applause
Scene: 19: Homelander flies saves people from car acc on the road and gains immedeate attention and huge fame
Scene: 20: Vought Introduces Homelander to entire America as The Superhero Homelander lands on the stage with a beaming smile and is overwhelmed at people cheering for him giving thunderous applause, Joyful for him.
Scene: 21: Madelyn Stillwell drinks a sip of red wine at her home and says to her husband James Stillwell "You nailed that performance with that kid though, Branding yourself as his reckoning, with all those newly taking over stories? When you were the one who orchestrated all those test for 18 years" She smiles.
Scene: 22: James Stillwell looking at the patio says: "If a person has to grow his profits and economy he has to be emotionally detached, You nailed it too dear, with all your maternal adoption performances while you were the one who strategized all those test for Vought for 18 years"
Scene: 23: Madelyn Stillwell says "Same, Profits is the currency for life I had to"
Scene: 24: James Stillwell says, The adoption papers will be finalized, the boy is coming home within 3 days, We shall never talk about this ever again.
Scene: 25: Madelyn Stillwell replies oh the Boy, John Gilman? Yes, I almost forgot, Yes, after all Vought seem to need Mama to boost its product for profit. She winks.
Scene: 26: Homelander stops a bank robberry where he saves Becca. The second he carries her he is swept off his feet by her and her by him. He asks flying towards the corner of the road with her in his arms. What's your name? She replies Becca, Becca Butcher. Homelander cares her and whispers Becca! what a sweet name! They both are lost in each other's eyes they land. she lands and walks on the platform, looking back at him agian and again every 10 seconds.
Scene: 27: James Stillwell is at his cabin and Homelander arrives inside his cabin. James says Homelander there you are. James shows Becca. Let me introduce you to a new staff Becca. Becca Butcher she will be your personal secretary, manage your Social Media accounts, followers and replies and your schedules and appoinments. Homelander looks and realizes its the same woman he saved at the bank
Scene: 28: Becca is overwhelmed stunned and swept off her feat so as Homelander, they both have an intense romantic tension as they hesitantly approach each other near and Homelander says: Oh? Oh yes We've met before. James raises his eyebrows and asks have you? Becca stammers and says gaining her composure yeah at the Bank robbery Homelander saved me. She then looks into his eyes and says he saved my life.
Scene: 29: Homelander says yeah nice to meet you. Nice to meet you Becca! Becca gains her nervous composure masking her swept off feat moment as laughter and says yeah nice to meet you. shake hands with each other.
Scene: 30: Becca looks at the tablet, Oh your profile is blowin up with messages, Your famous, world wide. She shows the tablet Billion followers overnight, I gotta she francitally shows indicating the tab take care of the fan follow So I guess I'll I'll Illl see you around? Homelander smiles with nod.
Scene: 31: Homelander adjusts his cape and sits in front of James in his cabin after Becca Leaves. He gives a sarcastic smile and says, That's gonna be pretty hard on her you know? If she knows the robbers were set by vought for its Brand Endorsement Superhero Publicity Stunt! He laughs sarcastically and says Poor Chic thinks I saved her. If she knew vought rehearsed me for it, I don't know he nods with attitude
Scene: 32: James Nods calmly and says, We have no choice son, After all those things you've been through with vought, which happened without our knowledge for 18 years If we must give you what you truly deserve from the world, Name, Fame, Glory, we have to do few things that is out of the way like rehearsals and training for publicity stunts. Becca was unfortunately a bait. She was sent by Vought for your instagram live save video
Scene: 33: Homelander smirks and looks at the window. I don't know where you get these Ideas from James, He snorts, But Thank You. Thank you for all that your doing, it means a lot. Thank you for seeing me, Your empathy and Madelyn's Empathy to adopt me as one among you and these Superhero tactics, name fame, something I never thought. It means a lot.
Scene: 34: Madelyn Stillwell walks in to the cabin and says, Nobody deserves to be treated the way you were in Vought, She holds him, You deserve better. Son. We're doing this all just for you. For you to be happy. Homelander holds her hands with tears sheding he thanks her.
Scene: 35: Madelyn Stillwell There is a party launch tonight at Vought, We are launching you as the face of the Vought, all the delegates and high stakes officials are so happy and eagar to see you. staff of the family members who have become your fans they all are going to be here. I hope you enjoy it.
Scene: 36: Homelander steps down as the Hero of the party welcoming guest with Americanized dignity his gaze then shifts towards Becca as the party continues. Becca is Dancing with her Husband Billy Butcher. He slowly walks towards Becca and says, Hello Becca? Good to see you! I hope you are enjoying the party with a plain smile.
Scene: 37: Becca is swept off her feat looking at Homelander and nervousness clouds her and she stammers "Oh? Homelander? Yeah? Yeah, I am thank you. Uh? This is my Husband Billy, Billy this is uh! Homelander" She giggles in romantic tension "America's greatest Superhero" She dramatically waves hands expressing herself like a nervous clown and laughs in romantic tension and nervousness. Billy calm and composed with his stoic masculine nature nods meeting Homelander's eyes and gently shakes hands with him. Homelander surprised knowing about her husband smiles astonished and meets Billy's eyes with a brief nod smiling and shaking hands gently.
Scene: 38: Homelander speaks with warmth to Billy Butcher your wife here is an excellent P.A. I would much rather let her walk as the Superhero when the fans are over-excited she's brilliant. Becca laughs in overwhelming joy the warm recognition he gives for her work, Billy is just pleased at his warmth and smiles.
Scene: 39: Billy asks so its not you when fans talk to you its actually becca? He is trying to understand the account profile handle dynamics with genuine curiosity. Homelander says: Yeah, Am afraid its a little cheat code that we do on behalf of me as I don't have much time for social media. Becca says smiling in joy, its that Homelander is busy saving life I carry the weight of dealing with his fans. They all giggle
Scene: 40: Homelander spots Mr and Mrs. Stilwell raising the toast from far and the delegates looking at him with beaming greeting smile. He says, now if you'd excuse me my Big Bosses who serves my salary awaits me. While you guys enjoy the party alright? he smiles and leaves as they giggle. Billy dances with Becca and Billy whispers with his sarcasm what perfect product to goofing around like that. Becca giggles and says Oh Billy stop it he is just being nice. Billy smirks with sarcasm Oh for God sake I'm through with all these people pleasing stuffs I know when I see one. Becca laughs, She playfully says He's got superhearing. Billy Laughs, But Homelander is completely occupied with Stilwell he doesn't hear them
Scene: 41: Homelander and Becca are summoned for a sting operation. James and Madelyn Stillwell Listen up there is a confirmation from school on a bunch of drug lords activity, So we are sending you Becca on a sting operation as a student and our Son John Gilman will acompany you in this mission as a fellow student, When there is a true requirement, when you see what you see you notify John and Homelander will appear to take care of the operation.
Scene: 42: John Gilman walks into the plaza of high school and meets Becca as if he is meeting her for the first time. Becca understands it is John from Vought and moves walking hand in hand with him to high school as students
Scene: 43: Football stars and sports players of high school tall irish and charming fall in love with Becca. Becca pretends to be smitten by them and plays along like a rad cheeer leader
Scene: 44: Becca plays along having sex with those High school football players and charming school bullies and high school sports players in the party hoping to get near or closer to the operation. Pretending to be lusty and enjoying all the attention exactly like a high school cheer leader
Scene: 45: John is bullied by Becca's High School Bully Boyfriends and High School Football stars and High school sports players for approaching Becca and talking to her. Becca plays along as if she is enjoying the boys bullying John. But John Gilman being the Homelander now absolutely free of all the previous childhood tortures cannot resist the anger within him. He throws the bullies away as the school walls crash breaking apart. Becca looks at him stunned.
Scene: 46: James and Madelyn Stillwell pay a visit as parents to Principal's office as per Vought's damage control protocol, covering up John's powers framing James and Madelyn where wrestling champions and John's genetics is usually stronger than normal people due to that and they perform an apology to Principal and urge John to appologize, privately stating that the sting operations mission is to save people bullied by the school bullies for which it is important to mask a persona. John feels restricted of his powers eventhough he agrees because of the sensitive part that connects him, saving from school bullies
Scene: 47: John Appologizes to those boys and those boys emotionally react scolding him and run away. Becca holds up John Gilman and her curiosity peaks she asks what was that? John says My Parents told already they were wrestlers. Becca says, I saw what you did to those boys, that wasn't a wrestler genetics the world may believe it but I don't.
Scene: 48: John Gilman calmly nods and takes her to a private room and reveals that he is Homelander Becca sucks in her breath in awe. says. Now I get it the injustice, She stammers clutching on to something you couldn't stand those injustice to however small people are. I understand, she clutches her chest. I now understand why Vought sent you on a disguise, Are you, really Stilwell's son? They adopted you when you fell from the sky? Raised you as gentleman and then revealed to the world as Homelander, She breaths heavily, it all makes sense now.
Scene: 49: John takes Becca to his private room in the Stilwell's home and reveals his true story that He didn't know if he was from the stars but that's what Stilwell said, and he tells her everything his 18 years of torture as an experiment of Vought. Stilwell getting to know about it and then releasing him from all those pain and adopting him. He shares all his unshared pain with Becca tells her everything all the traumas he underwent and how Vought blackmailed him tying a bomb around him always as he tried to escape once. How Stilwell freed him by taking over Vought.
Scene: 50: Becca and John Gilman share an intimate moment where Becca completely falls for him they make love with each other kissing and cuddling, rumbling they make out with each other they are sensually intimate with each other kissing everywhere on each other's body, they have a sexually explicit sex scene, They enjoy sex with each other. spend the entire night deep in love.
Scene: 51: John Gilman and Becca wake up kissing and sensually exploring, he carries her to the shower they enjoy sex in the shower they have breakfast snuggling together in the hall couch they watch tv sensually kissing each other. Then they decide to dress up for high school for their sting operations.
Scene: 52: When they are disguised as High schoolers and come out Becca spots Billy in the car observing John and Becca together Becca momentarily stunned introspects all her actions from getting naughty playing along sex games with high school football stars and sports players and school bullies to Homelander's secret Identity reveal and John's intimacy over a vulnerable moment. Becca says Billy I can explain, Billy drives the car away. staring at her.
Scene: 53: Becca in her high school sting operation as student with John Gilman robotically lives introspecting the Hurt Billy got, Her true love for Billy, Her soft corner for her fantasy figure Homelander in John Gilman identity. She masks a rad attitude teenager and plays along with the sports boys sensual but inside she feels she cheated on Billy
Scene: 54: Billy watches Becca at the High school kissing and enjoying sensually getting naughty and sexual with the young sports players and bullies the bad boys of the high school, Becca spots Billy watching her from the car from far and stands stunned, Billy averts his gaze after a stare and drives past
Scene: 55: Becca runs to her home Where she lives with Billy. Billy says, I visited Stillwell to see why haven't you returned home yesterday. I didn't know you were sleeping with Stillwell's boy. Becca nervous hurt says Billy, billy billy, cups his cheeks he looks down, Becca says Honey I can explain, its not what it looks like. Billy No it is exactly what it looks like. Becca says honey let me explain please for god sake listen to me just once. Billy looks at her with calm authority. He is profoundly alone, giving her the silent treatment for disrespect, taking for granted.
Scene: 56: Becca gains her composure though still nervous look Homelander and I are on a sting operation on a high school for tracking drug lord activity, Stilwell's boy is my assistant, and I being Homelander's secretary had to track every movement, for which I uh, unfortunately sometimes to get close to the activity had to do certain things and and, uh play along. that's it. Its not what it looks like. Billy looks at her with sharp eyes gives a knowing nod. He asks is that why you were sleeping with those boys? Becca spills yes accidentally and then says no, no I didn't. Billy gets up and goes to bed saying I have a feeling this is going somewhere Becca. He doesn't speak anything more.
Scene: 57: Becca sinks into the couch sits with her pain, her guilt, her dilemna of dwindling between her true loving husband Billy and her fantasy figure developing love confused between what is right and what is wrong. She doesn't know what to do. She loves her husband at the same time she is swept off her feat by Homelander. Her fantasy.
Scene: 58: At Vought Homelander and Becca are observing the school footages and and tracking the activities of every suspicious recording through the pen video Becca had during the school sting operations. Homelander notices her unrest and her diverting her concentration to work. He asks what is it Beck? with utmost heroic confidence. Becca averts her gaze and says no nothing. Homelander says Becca come on, I see you. Becca turns away and reluctantly says, I don't know what I am sure about anymore. I love Billy but then you came and uh? Homelander gets up with confidence and asks can Billy take care of you from flight crash? Becca looks at him, really looks at him. Homelander says I can. Becca's fantasy clowd her and is swept off her feat kisses him. Becca and Homelander make love in the huge Homelander Cabin, they are getting naughty, sensual and sexual with each other kissing.
Scene: 59: Homelander says he found out the activity but Vought restricts him from proceeding, They wanted to give me training sessions before I handle them. Becca says, You are Homelander, You are the most powerful being you can do whatever you want, you don't have the need for any restrictions, you are powerful you are free, what restrictions are they talking about? You are here to save people stop evil. You don't need restrictions to stop evil you are free. It gives an immense ego boost to Homelander he smiles with a dawn of realization feeling a sense of pride.
Scene: 60: Becca plays along the high school boys who lead the way to the drug lords. Homelander makes a dramatic appearance. I've been waiting for this my whole life. He uses absolute power in mercilessly destroying the drug lords blood sheds splashing all over, Homelander is on an absolute rage of rampage and he walks towards those High school bullies, High school sports boys, High school football boys who are using drugs and caught red handed and mercilessly beats the shit out of them his revenge. after which He feels unleashed, he feels powerful he feels absolute freedom. Becca who closes her eyes during blood sheds then watches him absolutely embracing himself and his power is attracted by the masculinity of it hops on him and kisses him.. they fly making out above the clouds having sex flying.
Scene: 61: Homelander and Becca are getting naughty in bed kissing sexing sexually exploring each other. Homelander is summoned and questioned by Vought, You realize the sheer brutality in which you've unleashed your power? Becca defends Homelander saying, They were firing at innocent people. Homelander panicked, He was so soft spoken well mannered, but the drug lords were on a rampage, Homelander didn't know how to stop them hurting people. He was left with no choice. A knowing wink smile passes between Homelander and Becca.
Scene: 62: Homelander is asked to vacate the terrorist from a building claiming demands. Homelander rolls his eyes and say, they won't let me rescue unless they shoot first. Becca says, its okay, I'm your P.A. I am here to take care of you. Go bash them do your thing! Homelander asks really? Becca says yeah usually the authorities follow a gimmick of shooting themselves to capture armed and dangerous volatile people. Bullets don't affect you so shoot yourself and tell them they shot first. Homelander makes a predetory smile and flies to the building he safely lands Becca down at the building plaza and takes off into the building.
Scene: 63: Homelander smashes the terrorist with fury and anger splashing bloodsheds then uses the machine gun to shoot himself making the bullets bounce off his chest. Then he breaks the glass and flies outside. He lands back to Becca and meets the officers surrounded and says. Its done officers. You guys are the true heroes. This is my personal secretary Becca. Becca Butcher. He introduces Becca to officers Becca overwelmed by the sudden joy happily shakes hands saying its an honor to meet you all. Its a pleasure to meet you.
Scene: 64: Homelander is asked to save a flight. The hostages are held within he bashes the gates of the light and lands inside the flight gets ripped off its steal and many civillians fly away in intense air pressure. Homelander is shocked for a second seeing them pass The terrorist in fear fires at him. Homelander gets angry and thrashes him. splashing blood. People for the first time question Homelander asking That was unprecedented, how are you suppose to get those people back? Homelander stunned says I did not, I didn't mean to. People question, you can't bring back those civilians life no matter what your heroics are young man. Homelander says, I'm sorry sorry, Its tough I know its tough, I am here to do the best I can. Passengers in emotional shock reacts to him, We saw your best just now how do you explain that? Each one asks different question chaos in Homelander's mind he screams shut up! The freequency in which he screams blasts all passengers off completely.
Scene: 65: Homelander stands there helplessly looking at the mess he has created, standing amidst bloodsheds of inncoent passengers gone. He doesn't know what to do. he stands there introspecting in shock. He doesn't know how or what he should react or why is he still there, what just happened.
Scene: 66: Homelander is questioned by James and Madelyn At the cabin question his actions by showing the vought security cameras videotaped Homelander bursting off into flight from a far high birds eye view. James says do you have any idea what you have done? Madelyn says this is why we offer you to rehearse with training dear so that everyone is safe. Homelander looks down saying I'm sorry James, Madelyn, I won't do it again. I'm ashamed but hey look at the bright side, no one can tell its me. James frowns his eyebrows everyone can tell. Madelyn says your the only one who can fly on earth anyone can tell its you. James says, Madelyn get ready for damage control.
Scene: 67: lies on the lap of Becca feeling so bad about what happened in the flight. He says Stilwells were having great hopes upon me, they adopted me. They rescued me from the tortorous vault and gave me this amazing name fame glory Becca strokes his hair gently and says. Why did they suddenly felt for you after 18 years? Homelander asks Am sorry what? Becca says as I was studying Vought's history James is the vice president of the company for the past 20 years. He set the tests for various experimental genetic babies. Madelyn strategized the test and the vought files says you are the most successful test subject. Homelander's eyes widen at her casual saying of general information he gets up and looks at her really looks at her. then he asks where are these files, Becca shows the tablet any vought staff can access it. Homelander brushes through the files and his eyes widen in fear, the manipulation is now blunt and openly visible.
Scene: 68: Homelander furiously walks busting open the cabin of James Stilwell and asks is it true? is it true? James stands puzzled slowly what is true? Homelander shows the file from Becca's tablet he had borrowed. James says no why? Homelander asks then why is your brain generating cortesol and feels peak of adrenalene? James tries to gain some composure. Look sometimes we had to do, what we should, there's nothing personal. But hey look at the bright side, your a global icon. Homelander says you do what you have, do you have any idea your "Am sure nothing personal" does to a helplessly choiceless kid? James says calmly I understand, but look, you've out grown all those, you have come out in flying colors. Madalyn arrives a knowing nod passes between James and Madelyn indicating he knows. Madelyn says taking a long pause. think of the freedom you have gained today John, Homelander says freedom, you call this a freedom? don't do this don't do that, rehearsals training its exhausting don't talk this way don't talk that way don't hold this way don't come in like that smile look pretty? I have been nothing but a product for you two. A son is out of the question.
Scene: 69: Madelyn were just careful your powers don't hurt people that's all, look at the flight for example. Homelander asks and what about the hurt you both gave me for 18 years? Did you even care before hurting me? before threatening a kid tieing up an bomb and emotionally blackmail? Homelander throws James out of the building breaking the glass james flies 50 ft away from the building and crashes splashing blood on a random building. Madelyn is shocked she moves forward but Homelander lazers her burning her to ashes completely
Scene: 70: Becca witnesses the horrific scene far far away without his knowledge, she quetely leaves fast in her car taking the day off. He goes to her husband Billy Butcher's CIA office meets him in the cabin and says we need to talk. She sits with him in the park tells him everything with brutal honesty from the Bank rescue in which she fell for him to about the James and Madelyn. Billy calmly listens and after a long pause says this is exactly what I am secretly fighting for as a CIA. The CIA knew Vought experiment would land as a threat to the society someday and is been investigating on compound V experiments for quiet long. You fell right into their public trap. Becca asks what you mean? Billy Butcher says you think he saved you and have regard that dove you into his fantasy? That is exactly the story vought is writing, they needed a damsell and they used you as a personal secretary so that Homelander can have his damsell story written for public records. Becca asks so your saying vought wrote the entire event? what about Homelander? Billy Butcher says Homelander knew all along it was all a set up and he was getting trained to behave in all vought's publicity stunt rescues. The realization lands like an ax for Becca that Homelander used her as a bait for his publicity stunt, and trapped her into love. The fact that he wasn't really saving her and was practicing rehearsing the entire rescue event lands like her fantasy and love broken into pieces of shillings.
Scene:71: Becca furiously comes to Homelander's Cabin and ask did you set me up with all those rescues and those thugs? Homelander smiles and says Becca good to see you? Becca says answer my question, Homelander asks what? Becca says you heard me. Homelander laughs it off trying to brush it aside. Becca asks Did you set me up on a rescue? used me as a bait? Whatever it was with those rehearsed thugs? What if? what if I was really hurt? Homelander turns and says, Becca You know I won't let that happen with casual smile. Becca asks I saw what you did with that flight full of civilians. You can let things happen. Homelander gains composure and says sometimes we have to do certain things to orchestrate, we have rehearsed those several times. Why do you worry about it now? Becca, You know I thought you really liked me. But with all those rehearsals and using me as a bait, well known thug relationships and training sessions of rehearsing publicity stunt orchestration to call yourself a hero. I don't know what the Stilwells did to you. And now with all those brutal ending of Stilwells instead of handing over them to the law enforcement, eventhough they deserved that but you with all those rage within, I don't know who you are anymore. She walks away. Homelander calls Becca but she doesn't listen. It infuriates Homelander an opinion that humans are just beastly inconsistent creatures who will turn their backs anytime foolish fragile beings reacting to others hurting them gets solidified within Homelanders
Scene: 72: Congressman Victor Neuman is protesting against Homelander after the flight for misuse of power. Homelander gets infuriated by the protest. Homelander is welcomed by a the new VP Ashley Bennet, Homelander greets Ashley Bennet, and sits on the meeting in which Ashley Bennet launches the seven. which has the team of superheroes under the guidance of Homelander, She welcomes Tech Night, A Train, Jack from Jupiter, Deep, Queen Maeeve and Black Noir to the seven.
Scene: 73: Homelander appears at Victor Neuman's protest against the supe for mis-use of powers, casually explains, see guys, unforturnately or fortunately I also get infuriated by rise of bad people and these things happen. Public questiosns what you mean by that? has it happened before? These thngs happen does it mean it has already happened? Homelander casually brushes it off and says laughing, no no no, it was that one time I was saving so many people relentlessly by terrorists and dangerous people I got infuriated by these guys. Not even for a second I thought my actions would go to this extreme and incurr losses. I even said I didn't intend that. People look at him calmly because he explains the way it should be, but he is not appologizing, Homelander concludes so cheer up everybody have great day and he flies off.
Scene: 74: Ashley Bennet is looking after the damage control of the flight incident and managing them. While Homelander is stiiting with the pain on his room of loosing Becca, the manipulative hurt caused by Stilwells and the human agony over the protest and rebel inside the flight which he blew up while bursting into the flight. While Billy Secures Becca to a protective outskirts location away from the Homelander.. Ashley Bennet comes to Homelander's cabin and informs about introducing the Seven of vought event tomorow. Homelander in a low gritty calm tempo says I'll be there.
Scene: 75: Homelander masks a face of professional smile and introduces the Seven as per Ashley Bennet's announcement in the public event he makes a dramatic landing and introduces the Seven First appears Jack the Jupiter. His fles and waves then comes Tech Knight, Homelander asks what are his powers. Tech Knight says I don't have any powers this suit is my powers. Homelander still masking a professional face outside rolls his eyes and whispers wonder who selected you with nothing. Deep is introduced from the ocean, A Train is introduced in full speed, Queen Maeve is introduced, Black Noir is introduced (what no one not even Homelander knows is Black Noir is Homelander's clone and is created by Vought to destroy Homelander if he gets extremely dangerous until then being extremely loyal to him outside ) Homelander welcomes him but Noir doesn't talk, eventhough he knows to talk and waiting for the right time to talk.
Scene: 76: Homelander addresses the public masking a casual smiile that he is happy to have a team of saviors and is happy to guide and lead the team of seven. In Vought the first meeting of the Seven is held, where Homelander talks about income and merchendising not about anything like saving or rescuing, he talks about maintaining the brand image that they are america's saviors he talks about orchestrated rehearsals for them to save the publicity stunt that boosts them together as a team.
Scene: 77: A Train is a few seconds late to the meeting. Before he arrives to the meeting he is in a hurry to reach the meeting. On the platform Corner 18 year old Hughie talks to his girlfriend Robin and A Train's speed bursts robin into pieces splashing blood on hughie as he is running on the road late for the meeting. He stops and looks he is in panic he doesn't know what to say or what to do he runs in full speed and arrives seconds late to the meeting. The meeting that is in the previously mentioned scene.
Scene: 78: Homelander summons for Becca after the meeting, he asks where is Becca I haven't seen her for days. Ashley Bennet says Becca resigned, It lands like a cold Fury on Homelander. Black Noir who stands a far listens watches and hears it all. At the out skirts of the city Becca and Billy Butcher live a secure protected life. Homelander opens the door and rages inside throwing Billy Butcher away effortlessly rapes Becca Butcher. The next day Billy files a serious complaints against Homelander's action to the CIA and the CIA team comes with a government issued warrant against Homelander to Vought, But Homelander has absolutely no idea about what happened with Becca nor he seem to know anything about him raping Becca. This causes some serious turmoil inside Homelander. He outlashes letting out his frustration to Ashley Bennet that these humans think they can say whatever out of control is on me and have the guts to take me in? That Boils Homelander. Ashley Bennet thinks of a publicity stunt where Tech Knight defeats Homelander and takes him in as part of Vought's damage control, Homelander reluctantly agrees to do the publicity stunt to settle things up.
Scene: 79: Becca's womb is heating up Billy doesn't know what to do he takes them to the hospital and the doctors summon vought officials who have well trained doctors to take such powerful babies lazering out their ways the moment it comes out it lazers out randomly to multiple people causing their end and Billy had to destroy it with axe to save people's life and save Becca's life. Billy's fury on Homelander gets extremely wild he is weaponizing it to a calm strength of dharma to defeat Homelander to take down Homelander.
Scene: 80: Tech Knight Vs Homelander Publicity stunt where Tech Knight holds Homelander accountable for his actions and fights him and takes him down then held by vought securities pretending to be officers taking away Homelander. Billy watches it on tv he knows its a hoax, a cover up by Vought. Vought introduces a new Superhero The German American Nazi experiment Storm front in place of Homelander. Stormfront takes over Vought like wild his rating is going so high eventhough he is a racist nobody has seen his racist persona yet. Homelander after few days delivers a scripted performance of Ashley's Idea of some Homelander fanatic has done this and I Homelander am unfortunately baring the consequences and I am been misunderstood for an outrageous fan by Billy and Becca, I will find this person and deliver justice to Becca. He givse a scripted performance filmed by Ashley Bennet's Vought creative team.
Scene: 81: Stormfront introduces a public beach event of heroes on vacation called Herogasms and Even Homelander is seen enjoying Herogasms But Homelander in reality cannot think of anyone else other than Becca, When Ashley Bennet tells Vought team to delete Homelander's footages Homelander accidentally stops by observing the footage he says, I didn't do that, I wasn't even at the event. Ashley Bennet wonders confused if homelander did not go there or he doesn't remembers.
Scene: 82: Billy Butcher gathers strength he gets Hughie affected by A Train's speed then finds a person called Mother's milk his name is Marvin, He is affected by Soldier Boy's rage and his friend Frenchie to go against the Vought, with the CIA Team he trains them. Marvin Mother's Milk already trained helps the CIA The CIA enquires a family that was given compound V to their daughter by Vought to be selected by Vought representative. The girl's name is Annie January her superhero name is Starlight. Billy sends Starlight as a spy to investigate what happens in the seven the Vought, Homelander's weakness.
Scene: 83: Ashley Benent Orchestrates a team of Homelander and Queen Maeve for all publicity stunt rescues and the duo is getting popular, The seven team is also getting popular, Starlight sent by the CIA who admired Queen Maeve as inspiration joins the Seven, She is personally welcomed by the Ideal Homelander and she is shocked to see Queen Maeve careless about anything smoking and drinking in the washroom, takes complements for granted, acting entitled. She has never seen Queen Maeve this way. Ashley Bennet gives a short sleeve bikini suit with a cape for starlight Starlight refuses it, But Ashley in order to impress her says Homelander approved it. Stunned by that Starlight reluctantly adopts the suit.
Scene: 84: Homelander notifies to be present at the seven for a warm welcome tonight. Starlight is awe at Homelander and is excited but also wonders why would Homelander tell to design me a suit like that. eventhough she is a CIA Spy with compound V super powers like the rest. At the Night Homelander welcomes starlight at the hall of seven resting living room, where Homelander shows his dick. and asks Starlight to do a blow job. Starlight is shocked and asks for help from near by A Train, Deep, Jack the Jupitor Storm front and Tech Knight but they too smile and show their dicks. Homelander says if you don't you are not part of the seven. Shocked by the sheer audacity Starlight reluctantly does the blow job to them. After which she sits in her room deeply hurt she informs the CIA what's happening and the next morning when she meets Homelander she breaks into tears saying I regarded you as a true Hero I never expected you to blackmail me with a blow job I am deeply hurt. Homelander is shocked to know that he asked her to do the blow job, because he still can't get his mind out of Becca and so much is happening without his knowledge. He has 0 memory of asking her He is so convinced that he did not ask such a thing. He says whoa whoa whao whao starlight slow down, I don't even remember noticing you. I'm just seeing you for the first time and welcome to the seven. But what is all this your bluffing about? Shocked and deeply hurt she looks at him with tears and walks away.
Scene: 85: Starlight sits in a park just out of Vought the seven building quetly sobbing where she meets Hughie, She talks to him about her own journey layered and cautious like have you ever experienced something what's it like to be that fantasy person that hero and reality blows you ups completely with totally like something else, Hughie says yeah I've been there and starlight asks really? excited and happy that she found some resonance on a stranger. Hughie says the A Train incident he underwent and the CIA Trainging they both connect with each other on a personal level. They are now hand in hand part of the strong team in the CIA that destroys the supes. In other words the Team relationship solidifies on a personal connection level.
Scene: 86: Billy notices a woman always staying in the dark never appearing out of the alley, Billy, Becca now healed from her hospital, Frenchie, Hughie and Marvin find her and realize she is Kimiko, who is a supe when compound v was V1 and is affected by the audacity of Soldier Boy lost her speech and went into a shell and doesn't want to be a supe or be anywhere in public anymore, Frenchie consoles her and forms a deep connection with frenchie. Billy understands her power is capability to radiate massive uranium radiation that is allergic to Homelander. She can heal herself even if broken to piece, she is super strong and uses her help to weaponize the radiation, by preparing massive weaponaries to destroy the supes. Congressman Victor Neuman as part of the government aids the CIA for this mission he is a strong helping hand of Billy and is also a strong ally
Scene: 87: Vought discovers that Starlight was talking to Hughie through the park security camera and this is notified to Homelander. Homelander summons the seven for a meeting and shows Starlight with this Hugie and questions starlight with his public persona of professional integrity and dignity, Queen Maeeve and Stormfront who were enjoying naughty sensually explicit sexual love making sex scene had to come for the meeting quickly dressed. Homelander says this guy filed a report against A Train for bashing his girlfriend robbin and he is a threat to seven's reputation. Queen Maeve says she didn't know look at her, she was just talking to a random stranger not knowing he is a threat. Homelander says whoa, This is the only time Queen Maeve gave a shit about anything. Starlight suggests look I didn't know maybe we should have a public appology by calling him to the seven and making A Train appologize? Homelander says smart missy, A Train? Are you ready to? he asks with casual playful attitude A Train reluctantly nods
Scene: 88: Hughie is asked to come to Vought, Butcher sets him up with all the secret gadgets that doesn't appear in scan or trackers. He gives him a Microphone, Video cameras Uranium bursting bombs in times of need to strike which Hughie effortlessly sets up in the hall of seven. He nervously meets A Train as the video camera rolls for the public to see A Train Appologizing, Hughies trauma of that scene, Robbin everything flashes his memories and A Train appologizes with a professional performances. Hughie receives the appology and leaves. Ashley Bennet says she has a recruitment test for a guy called Marathon who is super speed, The seven is asked to guide him with a crashing flight that Marathon saves from inside, The seven fly to the flight but doesn't know what to do. Homelander rams the flight to stop it but it costs a fatal blasts due to which Marathon, and another Hero called Web Weaver who comes to pilot the flight dies along with the other passengers as the flight is ripped apart by Homelander's trying to stop ramming and they web weaver and marathon fleshes are also ripped apart. The Supes land back at the seven without a guilt, that lives were lost Starlight is the only one who quietely weaps for life. Ashley Bennet calls for damage control to contain this from leaking to public But Starlight gives the video tape to Hughie by accessing vought security.
Scene: 89: Congressman Victor Neuman is running a massive protest against the outrageous rampage of the seven, Huhgie leaks the video causing outburst in public, The Seven Meeting the Homelander casually says I don't know to stop a plane, I rammed hoping it would stop, how do I know its gonna end up like that? The rest of the seven says we were trained for every public rescue this was unprecedented what are we suppose to do? Ashley Bennet stages a promotional appologetic video where The seven are sitting and weaping for those lives. Homelander performs all those lives in that plane, I thought I can rescue them all by stopping the plane, but the speed, the speed in which the plane was crashing it would have costed even more life, by crashing on brooklyn bridge and skating to the watergate bridge, I had no choice but to ramm the plane but, My power ripples, Queen Maeve performs you did what you could homelander, A Train performs yeah its not your fault man, Deep performs we got your back. Stormfront performs I tried to stop it from the back the ripples but if I stopped it it would cost a huge blast even bigger. Tech Knight, performs What is the use of me having so many tech when I couldn't even stop a plane full of life. Starlight weeps she doesn't perform she sincerely weeps. Vought releases the video of them with crashed plane on mud shore with so many lives lieying down. Gains Public Sympathy for the Supes.
Scene: 90: Ashley Bennet calls Homelander and tells him about the G-Men a school raised to train compound V experimented humans originally by Stilwell. Homelander snorts averting his gaze in attitude. Ashley Bennet says some of the students have come out expressing the Vought tortured them with experiment. Homelander is slipping to his trauma of him being tortured for 18 years. Ashley Bennet says, they need Homelander's empathy for Stilwell's original experiment and it would be nice if Homelander appears and shows some empathy. Homelander, says, Empathy, Yes, I would have given it if Stilwell was still heading the corporation. But Now, I am the face of Vought. If these Students come out it dawns on me, eventually it all will come to me. I wouldn't let my public persona tarnished by any means I can't risk that. Let me take care of it my way. He takes off from Vought building arrives to the G-Men school. Everyone thinks Homelander is here to listen and they all eagarly come to him. Homelander first talking with utmost integrity modesty performance. What you express is valuable, and I respect that I want you to stay safe so I wanna assure you what you say stays confidential lazers all the security camera then he mercilessly kills the entire G-Men and collapsing the entire building to pieces. Homelander asks Deep to record a video of building collapsing, with him standing. Homelander performs This building was mercilessly testing so many innocent lives, putting them into traumas, They don't deserve to live. Humans who don't respect or value lives are monseters. he performs like a calm fury of a hero who truly values life. Ashley Bennet releases another video along with this to the news that Vought was unaware of funding these experiment which they kept extremely secretive thanks to Homelander he destroyed the mad scientist who did not value lives. Homelnder lets out a bitter laugh watching Ashley Bennet's video thinking about the desperation to protect Vought, that ruined his life. Homelander asks what is your desperation to protect Vought Ashley. Ashley says I am the vp and its my duty to protect the image of vought. Homelander says, Very good with a sarcastic smile, casually says with sarcasm whispering That is why I am keeping you alive. Because now I am the face of Vought. and walks away.
Scene: 91: The G-MEN killing are also leaked when every Homelander's video of things are leaked, Vought sends Stormfront as they accidentally find out the Microphone and videos placed at the hall of seven and find the link to Hughie's presence at the hall of seven during the meeting. Homelander suspects if starlight may lead, there and Stormfront follows starlight to an abandoned hospital at the outskirts of the city where Hughie and his CIA Team Becca Billy, Marvin Frenchie Kimiko are functioning Stormfront crashes there and mercilessly attacks everyone Starlight and kimiko go on him on an ambush and Starlight with her powers blinds stormfront and Kimiko and his gang kills Stormfront with testing the uranium radiation weapons they have developed. Stormfront dies. Hughie and Starlight have romantic moment as Starlight breathes seeing Huhie safe, Hughie and Starlight kiss, They have sex happily, kissing each other's body, getting sensual with each other.
Scene: 92: The Seven is a mess of irresponsible fun sometimes Queen Maeve sleeping with Jack the Jupiter kissing sexually getting naughty, sensual cudling and making out intense. The Seven calls for a meeting by Homelander as the news of Stormfront dead reaches them. Tech Knight senses danger in this dynamics and he quits the Seven saying I am not going to be part of this crap. Homelander makes fun of him by countering you ain't worth a shit either casually high fiving and making fun of him. Starlight is notified the seven is gathering as per Hughie's advice she posts a video stating Seven is not what we think it is and she openly says about the blow job welcome, Exposes everyone releasing a video and walks out of the seven building, the moment they gather Billy radio controls the weapons of radiation uranium which huhgie effortlessly placed there which causes a blast and weakens the supes. Deep dies, A Train dies. Jack from Jupiter and Queen Maeve are heavily injured Homelander is weakened Black Noir is weakened
Scene: 93: Ashley Benent arrives at the hall of seven with vought team checking all the heroes at stake, She reveals its the CIA they've found ways to kill the supe and its funded by the Government under Congressman Victor Neuman. Infuriated by it Homelander flies with Queen Maeve Jack from Jupiter Black Noir to attack the white house as Homelander feels its high time to take full control as the government is becoming threat to him. Ashley Benet says you may not have weakened easily as you are soldier boy's gene Homelander gets to know he was a gene of Soldier Boy which is why he was most successful They release Soldier Boy who is contained in the chamber. and goes on a rampage at the white house. Tech knight now getting funded by the Government comes to stop them at the white house he kills Jack the Jupiter and Starlight kills her idol Queen Maeve. Stunned by the High Tech Homelander looks at him like really looks at him. Marvin Mother's Milk with the CIA Weapons Kills the Soldier Boy Billy Butcher, Becka Kimiko are after Homelander and Black Noir
Scene: 94: Billy follows Homelander and fights with him with all the Uranium tech weapons creating bullet wounds and beating the shit out of Homelander. It doesn't look easy for him to fight Homelander because he keeps lazering and he had to actively miss and his power is a wrath but despite all of it Homelander is stunned to see Billy Butcher can stagger him with his kick and punches. Billy says OI. I was trained by the CIA. I have been trained to Kill Supes even before you were born mate. He had to weaken Homelander by using the tech attacks and bullets and He says that was for raping my wife Becca. Hughie tries to hold Homelander tight and says get a dose for asking Starlight to do the blow job. Black Noir says, He didn't rape Becca I did. Nor he asked a blow job from Starlight, Nor the Herogasm Homelander was him. It was me. Everyone is stunned looking at Noir. Homelander says Noir you can talk? When Noir unmasks him they all see the face of Homelander. Black Noir says I am Homelander's Clone.
Scene: 95: Black Noir says I was Vought's protocol for damage control programmed to erradicate Homelander when he goes dangerous. But then I realized He was dangerous but Vought kept on clearing his name through campaigns and video promotions. So I decided to execute my mission by slowly damaging your name. I raped Becca dressed as you, created a turmoil, I was in the Herogasm dressed as you enjoying women, created trauma within you to self sabatoge, I asked starlight to give a blow job dressed as you. Tarnished your reputation. Now that you have come up to invading the white house my protocol says Homelander Lethal. Homelander is infuriated by this and there is a heavy super human battle between Black Noir and Homelander blasting off cracking walls destroying patios crash boom bang battle between them where Black Noir tears him apart and kills Homelander
Scene: 96: Before Black Noir could turn back after Killing Homelander Billy comes and rips his head off with High tecch machine they developed using the elements that weakens Homelander. Billy Butcher Kills Black Noir and splashing his blood black Noir's head been split off by Billy he says and that was for Becca. Hughie tears Black Noir's body a part with weaponaries saying that was for Starlight . Black Noir dies and Hughie breaks into crying. Starlight consoles him. Billy looks with a knowing calmness a peace dawning within him Becca and Billy pass a knowing peacefull calm look an understanding that its all over.
Scene: 97: Government Honors Billy Butcher, Marvin, Hughie, Kimiko,Frenchie, Tech Knight Starlight for standing up against the Supes. Tech Knight donates all his weaopons to protection of humanity being a filthy rich in material life. He dedicates all his weapons to protect Humanity not against each other and prints a contract for government to sign they will not use his weapons to fight against other countries. It is only for humanity protection like these Supes or any aliens.
Scene: 98: Vought is been sealed by the Government for promoting wrathful supes and volatile test on humans Marvin and Billy also Frenchie and Kimiko are now officially appointed as the Supe killers whenever any supe raises and goes out of control the Government will assign them to contain the mission Hughie continues by running the gadget store in which he was working. Starlight in her secret Identity as Annie January manages the Counter. Billy and Becca are living their Happy life as Billy leaves for work Becca is managing the house.
Scene: 99: Annie January is selling at the counter of the gadget store and Hughie is explaining to the customer about the product small time Thugs arrive with weapons demand cash from the counter secretly without disturbing anyone else pointing the gun straight at Annie. Annie uses her power of her eyes turning golden color heating up the gun, the thugs put them down and Annie beats him, One of the Thug holds Hughie, Annie smiles because Hughie having trained by CIA can take care of himself Hughie swoops the thug and they themselves contain the situation the customer audience who have come to buy clap. they tie up the thugs and hand them over to the local authorities in the platform.
Scene: 100: Last scene: Annie and Hughie are closing the store for lunch and decide to have lunch in a good restraunt on their way to the restraunt there is a chase of robbers on a car by authorities and firing between them happening on the road while chasing, people run scattered. Hughie looks at Annie January she looks for the phone booth and transforms into starlight flies and blocks the car. The car crushes against her legs the robbers come out and fire at her. Bullets have no effect on her. She uses her power with palms facing them that pushes them 10 feet backward towards the authorities. The Authorities look at Starlight and salute saying Thank You Starlight. Starlight calmly nods and flies away. she then joins Hughie as Annie January coming through an alley and walks to have lunch. The Newspaper man throws a paper on a residence nearby that says Dawn of Starlight with Starlight photo on the front page.
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