THE STAGE 32 LOGLINES
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ZERO LIES
By Vamsi Tankala
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A slick and manipulative investment banker’s life spirals into chaos when a seemingly insignificant argument triggers a curse that forces him to tell the truth for an entire day, leading to a series of awkward, career-damaging, and hilariously revealing moments.
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When manipulative investment banker Max Kane has a petty argument with a security guard, he’s cursed to tell the truth for one entire day. Unable to lie, Max’s carefully crafted world unravels as he inadvertently sabotages his career, exposes his personal flaws, and causes a series of awkward and hilarious situations. What starts as a chaotic 24 hours forces him to confront the lies he’s been telling and maybe, just maybe, he’ll find a new way to live.
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You could leave out "with a security guard". It actually creates some intrigue if we don't know who. And "leading to a series of awkward, career-crushing, and deeply funny revelations" is something we already should assume, so could also be left out. Shorter the better in my opinion.
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Kathryn Zizek I really appreciate the valuable feedback and suggestions. I'll be sure to modify the logline as recommended. Thank you so much!
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