GENRE: Adventure
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> When her nomadic ocean community is threatened by the shifting planet, a brilliant but isolated **Cartographer** must use the forbidden technology of a lost civilization to stop a massive machine that is draining the world's oceans, forcing her to choose between preserving the chaotic freedom she loves and the unforgiving stability demanded by an ancient enemy.
Thank you, Koby! As a screenwriter, I always aim for that 'one big image' that can anchor the entire world, and I’m glad the ocean-siphoning visual did that for you. I also appreciate the note on the genre—'Epic Sci-Fi' definitely hits the mark for the scale I'm aiming for. I’m currently polishing a separate pilot, but I'd love to stay in touch as my drafts evolve!
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Excellent!
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looking forward to see a script .
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I love your vision; the idea is very bold.
With my vivid imagination, I can already picture the gigantic spaceship sucking up the oceans.
I'd love to know more.
For the genre, you could add science fiction to make it clearer.
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Thank you, Koby! As a screenwriter, I always aim for that 'one big image' that can anchor the entire world, and I’m glad the ocean-siphoning visual did that for you. I also appreciate the note on the genre—'Epic Sci-Fi' definitely hits the mark for the scale I'm aiming for. I’m currently polishing a separate pilot, but I'd love to stay in touch as my drafts evolve!
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