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THE LAST CARTOGRAPHER

THE LAST CARTOGRAPHER
By Salisu Abdullahi

GENRE: Adventure
LOGLINE: The Logline > When her nomadic ocean community is threatened by the shifting planet, a brilliant but isolated **Cartographer** must use the forbidden technology of a lost civilization to stop a massive machine that is draining the world's oceans, forcing her to choose between preserving the chaotic freedom she loves and the unforgiving stability demanded by an ancient enemy.

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Epic Sci-Fi / Adventure

Sijun Cui

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Sijun Cui

Excellent!

Marcos Fizzotti

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Michael Dzurak

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Nathaniel Baker

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Jay A Swendris

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Jay A Swendris

looking forward to see a script .

Richard Recco

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Minh Nguyen

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Minh Nguyen

I love your vision; the idea is very bold.

With my vivid imagination, I can already picture the gigantic spaceship sucking up the oceans.

I'd love to know more.

For the genre, you could add science fiction to make it clearer.

Dwayne Williams

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Salisu Abdullahi

Thank you, Koby! As a screenwriter, I always aim for that 'one big image' that can anchor the entire world, and I’m glad the ocean-siphoning visual did that for you. I also appreciate the note on the genre—'Epic Sci-Fi' definitely hits the mark for the scale I'm aiming for. I’m currently polishing a separate pilot, but I'd love to stay in touch as my drafts evolve!

Kakha Beridze

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