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RENT-A-FIANCÉ

RENT-A-FIANCÉ
By Fares Moha

GENRE: Romance, Comedy
LOGLINE:

A heartbroken woman hires a fake fiancé to make her ex jealous, but as their staged romance goes viral and the lines between acting and reality blur, she realizes she's been chasing the wrong guy all along

SYNOPSIS:

LOGLINE

A heartbroken woman hires a fake fiancé to make her ex jealous, but as their staged romance goes viral and the lines between acting and reality blur, she realizes she's been chasing the wrong guy all along.

SYNOPSIS

MAYA RIVERA (31) is smart, independent, and secretly exhausted from being everyone's rock. She's also freshly dumped. Her ex JULIAN—good-looking, polished, rich without trying, ended things the second she brought up commitment. Two weeks later, he's already showing off a new girlfriend who looks like she stepped out of an Instagram ad.

Maya tells herself she doesn't care... until her little sister's wedding. Her family loves her, but they turn every "concern" into thinly-veiled criticism. And Julian will be there. Worse: with his perfect new girlfriend. No way she's being the sad single sister under those fluorescent banquet lights.

In a panic, she downloads RENT-A-FIANCÉ, an app for "event companions." Her goal is simple: make Julian jealous. Let him see her "moved on," make him hurt a little, and watch him come crawling back.

She hires NATE BROOKS (34), charming, funny, perceptive... and clearly not from Julian's world. Nate's an actor who never made it, the kind of guy juggling multiple jobs to stay afloat: Uber driver, catering gigs, humiliating commercial auditions—and also, quietly, fake fiancé for hire. He's charming because he has to be. He reads people to survive.

They set strict rules: one wedding weekend, no real feelings, no complications.

At the rehearsal dinner, Nate is too good. He shakes hands like a future politician, remembers everyone's name, invents a sweet "how we met" story on the spot that melts the whole family. Maya's mom adores him. Her dad "tests" him with a shot. Nate throws it back, coughs, and calls it "excellent... cold soup," which cracks up the entire table. Julian watches from across the room, jaw tight. It's working.

After the wedding, Maya should end it, mission accomplished. But Julian starts texting. Calculated texts. A compliment here. A jealous jab there. Maya's bruised ego lights back up. She convinces herself she just needs Nate one more time to push Julian over the edge.

Call #1: a "casual" dinner with mutual friends where Julian happens to be. Nate plays the perfect fiancé so naturally he becomes the star of the night. He improvises romantic stories that are dangerously believable. Maya has to keep up, trapped in the details Nate's making up. Julian's jealousy intensifies—not just because Nate's handsome, but because Maya looks alive again.

Call #2: karaoke night—Julian's favorite spot. Nate pitches a strategy like a coach: "We win the room. We create a moment." Maya's terrified. Nate gets on stage with her anyway. They belt out a cheesy 90s hit with absurd sincerity, turning it into a hilarious, electric "couple performance" that has the whole bar screaming. Someone films it.

Next morning, the video is everywhere. TikTok explodes. Millions of views. People nickname them "the couple who set karaoke on fire." Memes multiply. Strangers recreate their duet. A local news outlet reaches out. Overnight, Maya and Nate become the viral couple—and their lie now has an audience.

Maya's thrilled and horrified. Julian's shaken. And Nate sees the danger clearly: this isn't private anymore.

Call #3: Maya's mom's birthday—because the family demands the "fiancé." Nate shows up between jobs, visibly running on fumes. The family insists he entertain them, so he does. He becomes the life of the party, improvises games, stories, even a toast that's funny until it lands on something true: Maya's spent her life carrying everyone else. Nobody carries her. Maya laughs to hide the lump in her throat. Julian, who drops by "unexpectedly," watches Maya glow—and it pisses him off at himself.

From there, Nate becomes Maya's unofficial coach in her mission to get Julian back. He helps her write texts that don't sound desperate. He teaches her how to walk into a room without apologizing. He rehearses conversations with her, does ridiculous impressions of Julian that make Maya laugh until she can't breathe.

And the more Nate helps her chase Julian, the more Maya changes, for the better.

The contrast becomes obvious: Julian's world is easy money, fancy dinners, status without effort. Nate's world is three jobs, taped-up shoes, and a heart that still shows up. Nate never buys Maya expensive things, he gives her something rarer: his presence.

Halfway through, Maya breaks down after a rough day. Nate stops joking. He makes her a simple meal, sits with her in the silence, and says the one thing that hits like truth: "You don't deserve to be chosen halfway." Maya doesn't know what to do with that... so she keeps chasing Julian anyway.

The plan works too well. Julian starts coming back—soft, sincere, nostalgic. He asks Maya for coffee. He admits he screwed up. He says he wants to try again "for real."

Maya thinks she's won what she wanted.

For the final push, she asks Nate to come with her to a fancy charity gala where Julian will be—one last public confirmation that she's "unavailable." Nate agrees, though something in his eyes says he knows this is a bad idea.

At the gala, Nate's uncomfortable in his borrowed suit. Maya's glowing, aware that Julian's watching from across the room. During the auction, Nate tries to play the part, he raises his paddle to look impressive, but doesn't realize he's actually bidding. The auctioneer points at him: "Sold to the gentleman in blue!" Maya goes pale. It's $8,000. For a weekend in the Hamptons.

They rush to the bathroom to panic privately. "I can cancel this, right?" Nate whispers. "Not without making a scene," Maya says. They're stuck. In the hallway, they run into the event coordinator who, recognizing "the viral karaoke couple," begs them to get on stage for a quick testimonial, "Just two minutes, people would love it!"

Maya wants to refuse but sees Julian watching. She says yes.

On stage, under the lights, Nate starts light, charming, then something breaks. He talks about Maya like someone who really sees her. He says she deserves someone who chooses her without hesitation, who stays when it's hard, who doesn't bail the second things get real. His voice shakes slightly. The room goes quiet. Maya realizes, horrified, that he's not acting anymore. He's talking directly to her, in front of 300 people.

The crowd applauds, moved. Julian clenches his jaw. He just realized he's losing her.

The next day, Julian meets Maya at the coffee shop where they had their first date. He says all the right words. That he was scared. That he was an idiot. That he wants to try again for real this time. Maya hesitates—then says yes.

Julian kisses her. A real kiss, passionate, victorious.

What Maya doesn't see: Nate's there. She'd asked him to stick around "in case Julian doesn't show." He's posted by the window, half-hidden behind a newspaper he's not reading.

He sees everything.

The kiss goes on. Julian holds Maya like he just won something. And Nate stays frozen, can't look away. His face doesn't move, it's just his eyes that change. Something goes out in them. His hands tighten around the newspaper, barely noticeable. He stays there a few more seconds, like he needs to understand it fully, let the reality sink in completely.

Then he folds the newspaper, sets it on a table, and leaves.

Maya finally looks up, she's searching for Nate to signal that "it worked." But he's gone. Just an empty chair and an untouched coffee going cold.

She tells herself she'll text him later. Thank him properly. That he'll understand.

But something in her chest tells her she just lost more than she gained.

That night, Maya realizes something terrifying: the kiss was real... but not alive. With Julian, everything's like before, and that's the problem. It's the past. Something inside her has shifted. She gets it now: while she was trying to make Julian jealous, Nate was helping her rebuild her self-worth... and her heart moved without permission.

Maya runs to find Nate, only to discover he's gone. He turned in his keys, shut off his phone, and left town.

Maya races across the city, following clues through people who now recognize Nate from TikTok. The clock's real. The stakes are real. She reaches the terminal just as Nate stands there with a bag in hand, about to leave.

She stops him, breathless, finally honest: she didn't just want Julian back, she wanted to feel valuable again. Nate gave her that. And she doesn't want a guy who only comes back when he feels threatened. She wants the one who showed up when nobody else did.

Nate tries to shield himself with a joke, "I still charge by the hour, you know", but he can't hide the hope in his eyes. Maya offers a new deal, the only one that matters: no roles, no plans, no app. Just a real date.

Nate drops the bag. He chooses to stay.

As they kiss, a stranger recognizes them, "It's the karaoke couple!" and starts filming. Maya panics: "We're going viral again." Nate smiles, finally real: "At least this time it's true."

END.

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