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GEORGE LOVE
By Kevin Maurice Butler

GENRE: Comedy, Drama, Family
LOGLINE: (3rd place 2012 Baltimore Screenwriters Competition/Finalist 2012 Carolina Film & Video Festival) Fired because of racial discrimination, Harry Butler struggles to raise his family. He plans to enjoy the fruits of his labor but an unfortunate incident may ruin his plan.
Charlotte Hardt

This is a great hook. Is there a side story or series of shots that explains why Harry gets the moniker of George Love?

Charlotte Hardt
@Charlotte Hardt

The last line of your synopsis is perfect. that is the hook.

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