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When dogs are pushed out of their homes in a neighborhood that favors cats, an idealistic dog builds Dog’s Land, a sanctuary for dogs like him. But when his former oppressor plots to erase dogs forever, he must decide whether to take revenge or learn how to make peace with those who hurt him.
SYNOPSIS:
Spot is a happy-go-lucky dog who once lived a perfect life inside his home—until an accident involving Luna, an adopted cat hiding a deep-seated trauma, gets him permanently kicked out by their owner, Aubrey.
After a year of failed attempts to get back inside, Spot finally gives up. If he isn’t wanted in the house, he decides to stop asking for permission to belong. Driven by his longing for home and identity, Spot creates Dog’s Land, a wild, garbage-built playground where dogs can be dogs freely, without rules and without asking.
As Dog’s Land grows into a secret haven for dogs, a darker plan unfolds on the other side of the fence. Led by Poppy, a diva-like and manipulative cat, a group of felines plots to erase dogs from existence using a memory-altering device invented by Aubrey herself. At Poppy’s side stands Luna, torn between loyalty, fear, and unresolved pain, while Napoleon, a mysterious and unhinged hamster, quietly pushes the plan toward dangerous extremes.
When Spot and Luna are forced into direct confrontation, the emotional wounds that shaped them collide with a conflict far larger than either expected. Their personal trauma becomes inseparable from the fate of their homes, forcing them to face whether healing is possible or if fear will drive everything toward irreversible loss.
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Unique concept, Alex Olguin! I think your logline could be tightened up some, and I suggest adding Spot’s goal. Something like: In a neighborhood where cats and dogs clash over privilege, a dog driven from his home creates a place where dogs can live free. When the cat who took his home plots to erase dogs forever, he ____________ (his goal and the stakes).
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