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In a neighborhood where cats and dogs clash over privilege, Spot, a dog displaced from his home, creates Dog’s Land, a place where dogs can live free. But Luna, the cat who took his home, plots to erase dogs forever. Now Spot must unite his kind or lose the very freedom he created.
SYNOPSIS:
In a neighborhood where cats have stripped dogs of the privilege of living indoors, Spot, tired of failing to reclaim his place, builds Dog’s Land, a home for all the strays like him, where dogs can finally be themselves without judgment.
But Luna, the cat who displaced Spot, leads an anti-dog cult with a plan to use a device that will make humans forget dogs forever. As pets of the same owner, Aubrey, Spot and Luna must face each other in a battle to defend their worlds and what they hold most dear.
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Unique concept, Alex Olguin! I think your logline could be tightened up some, and I suggest adding Spot’s goal. Something like: In a neighborhood where cats and dogs clash over privilege, a dog driven from his home creates a place where dogs can live free. When the cat who took his home plots to erase dogs forever, he ____________ (his goal and the stakes).
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