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HEAVEN SENT

HEAVEN SENT
By Abe Novick

GENRE: Comedy
LOGLINE:

God and Jesus return to Earth to fix their PR problem — but

between cancel culture, conspiracy theorists, and a world

that’s moved on, their divine comeback is anything but holy.

SYNOPSIS:

Pilot Plot Summary:

Act I: Heaven

Begins with B.L. Zeebub plotting and addressing the camera

and then it quickly switches to Heaven, where we meet God

and Jesus lounging on clouds, watching the world below.

Jesus is frustrated with how people have interpreted His

message, and God, ever the old-school dad, is blissfully

unbothered. After a back-and-forth about how humanity has

distorted their stories, Jesus has an idea:

They need to return to Earth to set the record straight.

But to truly blend in and understand modern humans, they

make a pact (pinky swear!) not to use their powers.

Of course, things never go according to plan.

Act II: Rome—The Vatican

Their first stop will be the Vatican, where they suddenly

appear before the Pope, nearly giving him a holy coronary.

Jesus demands to know why the cross is still His main

symbol, despite the obvious trauma attached to it. Soon

enough Mom pays a visit to close out the episode followed

by a quick tag to leave the audience in stitches and

wondering what’s next.

Sample Scene from Act II:

POPE:

(To Jesus)

Impressive. You do have a flair for

the dramatic

abe_novick@yahoo.comHeaven Sent: An Animated Half-Hour TV Comedy

Pilot and Series Treatment

By Abe Novick

GOD:

And he’s got those movie star looks

too.

MARY enters the room.

MARY:

He could use a haircut!

GOD:

Mary?

POPE:

Holy Mother?

JESUS:

Mom?

MARY:

(looking at God and Jesus)

What are you two knuckleheads up to?

Mary, as expected, upstages the moment, and in the next

episode, will steer the conversation toward a new problem —

our duo needs to rebrand.

First Season Summary:

After a quick stop in Times Square, the first season

follows God and Jesus on a road trip across America and

headed out west to Hollywood.

Along the way, they encounter a world that has wildly

misunderstood their teachings.

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