Unique concept, @Vladimir! I can tell this is going to be action-packed, thrilling, and suspenseful!

I think you're really close to a solid logline. I think it could be tightened up a little. Something like: A young security company owner, determined to avenge her father’s murder, uses her team of bodyguards to cleanse the city of assassins, unaware two of them secretly work for criminals and are hunting her.

Maurice Vaughan, I really liked your logline, I think it’s perfect. There’s a hint of drama in it..."