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HOTEL PUERTO RICO

HOTEL PUERTO RICO
By Juliana Philippi

GENRE: Comedy
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A high-strung hotel director who has dedicated seven years of her life to the  undying success of the hotel, needs to find the courage to expose the pejorative truth of how the hotel operates, or she risks losing her only chance of winning back the love of her life, forever.

Michael Dzurak

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Elle Bolan

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Maurice Vaughan

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Maurice Vaughan

I like the concept and title, Juliana Philippi! Is this a Comedy or Rom-Com script? It sounds like a Rom-Com from the logline.

I think your logline could be structured better. What about this: After dedicating seven years to the undying success of a hotel, a high-strung director searches for the courage to expose the pejorative truth of how the hotel operates, or risk losing her only chance of winning back the love of her life forever.

Leonardo Ramirez

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Richard Recco

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Juliana Philippi

Maurice Vaughan It is a tad bit rom com-y, lol, but it feels more like a comedy overall. Parody satire and comedy, think “The Birdcage” with Nathan Lane and the late, great Robin Williams. And I’ll play with the log line, give it a better frame.

Lauren Hackney

I like this logline - I immediately thought of Emma Thompson or Meryl Streep to play the lead. Almost like her character in 'It's Complicated'. Great idea for a screenplay!

Lauren Hackney

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Juliana Philippi

Lauren Hackney thank you!!! Those are top players! Yeah, similar feel to them, very smart, very out there, the Latina version of EmmaThompson, lol!

Adam Spencer

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