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In a violent and darkly funny fantasy world that mashes genres and subverts classic archetypes, a collection of disgraced “adventurers” haunted by their past mistakes are set on a collision course. As they fight for a chance at redemption, a magical world on the brink fights with itself over who has the right to power - those to whom it is born, or those who would take it for themselves?
You got the good for a good logline here, but it's way too long.
I'd pare it down to: "When a collection of disgraced 'adventures' wind up in a magical world on the brink, they fight for who has the right to power."
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I agree with you MIchael, that it's a little longer than your standard logline, but it's a complex and ambitious show that's really about two things - how broken people come back from spectacular failure, and what happens to people when more and more power is concentrated into fewer and fewer hands. And that's before I even get into how Dungeoneers genre hops in a way that isn't forced but is intrinsic to the plot of the three-season show.
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