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SYNOPSIS:
In rural Montana, four young men — Jack, Will, Adrian, and Rico — pull off their first job together and taste what they believe is freedom. Will is the architect, the one who sees three moves ahead. Jack is the executor, calm under pressure, the man the room instinctively turns to. For one night, they are brothers. Then Jack meets Marilyn — a pianist in a late-night bar — and everything shifts. Will, who saw her first, decides she belongs to him. What begins as a rivalry over a woman becomes something darker: a test of who controls whom, and how far Will will go when something slips from his hands. Jack chooses Marilyn. Chooses to leave. Will makes a phone call. And on a Montana farm, two years later, a lamp burns on a fence post — and nobody answers when Marilyn calls Jack's name. Ten years on, a boy named Brian Weston kneels in the soil. He doesn't know what his father was. He only knows the absence. And that he remembers everything.
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