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CAN I TAKE A MINUTE
By Elijah Gonzalez

GENRE: Thriller / Suspense
LOGLINE:

Told through a series of therapy sessions, Can I Take a Minute is a haunting exploration of grief, identity, and self-deception. What begins as a story of loss becomes something darker as Jacob, a 26-year-old man living as his 12-year-old brother Danny, is slowly forced to confront the truth: Danny never existed the way he remembers. A blend of memory glitches, visual distortions, and quiet horror builds toward a devastating revelation—Jacob didn’t just lose his brother. He buried himself.

SYNOPSIS:

Jacob is quiet, composed, and utterly broken. At 20, he lost his 12-year-old brother Danny to suicide—and ever since, he’s coped the only way his mind could manage: by becoming him.

For years, Jacob has drifted between identities, slipping into Danny’s skin like armor. Now, at 26, he walks into a therapist’s office—not as Jacob, but as Danny. The therapist doesn’t speak. She communicates through vibrations and low-frequency hums, creating an eerie, symbolic space where healing feels alien—and unavoidable.

Each session is less about confession and more about collapse. Told in nonlinear fragments, memory distortions, and sensory echoes, the story unfolds through the eyes of a man no longer certain who he is. The vibrations—sometimes calming, sometimes harsh—mirror the subconscious pressing him toward the truth.

As the therapy deepens, Jacob’s illusion begins to fracture. Violent memories surface. The mirror doesn’t show Danny anymore—it shows him. And the more he sees, the harder it becomes to stay inside the lie.

By the final session, the boundary between past and present shatters—and what began as performance becomes a desperate reckoning with guilt, identity, and the part of him he never allowed to live.

CAN I TAKE A MINUTE

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