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TARGETED. SURVEILLED. STILL STANDING

TARGETED. SURVEILLED. STILL STANDING
By Michael Reeves

GENRE: Documentary
LOGLINE: After being shot multiple times during a violent home invasion in the United States, a Liberian immigrant — who was previously deported into a war zone — returns to America and is caught by ICE. But when federal prosecutors bring illegal reentry charges, the district court dismisses the case, calling the prior deportation inhumane and the prosecution itself questionable. Instead of protection, he’s met with brutal ICE retaliation, two surgeries after his arm is broken in custody, and a sprawling multimillion-dollar drone and helicopter surveillance campaign meant to silence him. Targeted across states, banned without cause from Facebook, Reddit, and Quora, and cut off from every path to rebuild, he’s hunted but unbroken — and takes his fight for justice to the courts, the press, and the world."
Lauren Hughes

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Lauren Hughes

Hi, thanks for sharing.

You should try and keep your logline brief - 25 to 30. and precise. I read a script earlier today I think it was called MICKEY where Maurice Vaughan posted a logline templet in the comments.

Keep it up this sounds really interesting and i will definitely keep an eye out for your revised version.

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