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NOT ALIGNED

NOT ALIGNED
By Nataly Kiut

GENRE: Animation, Adventure
LOGLINE:

In a world where kindness is enforced under threat of exile to Antarctica, a perfectionist bowerbird loses his egg and, in searching for it, uncovers a system where care has become control — and must choose between perfect order and a living, imperfect life.

SYNOPSIS:

In a world where animals are forced to “do good” for one another under threat of exile to Antarctica, a program called The Great Burrow is enforced: each species must build a home not for itself, but for another. The Council oversees the process, turning care into a system of strict control.

Shik is a bowerbird obsessed with perfect order and symmetry. His life changes when he receives an egg — a mark of recognition and his right to remain within the system. But due to a logistical error, the egg disappears.

Trying to recover it, Shik is drawn through different layers of this world: indifferent bureaucracy, absurd rules, and rigid hierarchy. He accuses a Cuckoo, who, as it turns out, rescues “unclaimed” young — those the system has rejected. But his egg is not among them.

As his search continues, Shik discovers the hidden side of the system — Rick’s ranch, where “ideal” specimens are kept in controlled conditions. Life is preserved there, but stripped of freedom. Even the termite queen refuses to reproduce in captivity.

With the help of Lumi — alive, sincere, and imperfect — Shik finds his egg in an incubator. But hearing her song and seeing the other eggs, he makes a different choice for the first time: he leaves his egg among the others.

This choice sets off a chain of events. Different species begin to act together, disrupting the system’s order. The ranch collapses. The creatures are freed.

In the end, Shik confronts the Council. He refuses to return to the system and, together with others, chooses the status of outcasts — but free.

When his chick hatches — weak, crooked, “not aligned” — Shik does not try to fix it for the first time. He accepts it as it is.

And calls it — perfect.

Translated with the assistance of AI.

Zootopia meets 1984

Animated dystopian drama with anthropomorphic characters

NOT ALIGNED

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