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A young girl, abandoned by her father, must learn to stand on her own. Guided by the compass within her, she rises through pain, hope, and determination to reach the peak of life.
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Based on a true story, this moving drama follows a young girl whose world is shattered after her father’s departure. Forced to navigate a harsh and lonely reality, she learns to endure through resilience and hope. Confronting pain, loss, and isolation, her inner compass guides her on a powerful journey to reclaim her dignity and rise to the very peak of her life.
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FROM LONELINESS TO THE PEAK sounds like a gripping, moving story, @Ilay! I think your logline is a good start, but I think it's vague. I suggest telling what her journey and the peak of her life are, and I suggest adding the stakes.
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