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"What Others Don't See" follows Nelya, a teenage girl forced to leave her childhood village and the fading memory of her missing father. Hoping for a fresh start in the city, she instead faces cruelty and isolation at her new school. Desperate and broken, Nelya turns to something darker — summoning a demon to defend her. One by one, her tormentors suffer… until a classmate dies. Horrified, she begs the demon to stop. But the truth is even more haunting: the demon was once a kind boy, shattered by the same cruelty Nelya now endures. A psychological horror with elements of mystery and tragedy, this story explores how pain turns into vengeance — and how evil can be born from those the world chooses to ignore.
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Thank you from the bottom of my heart, Ryan, for your kind words and generous rating!
This story means a great deal to me — it comes from a very personal place — so your support truly touched me.
I'm so happy it resonated with you, and I truly hope it will grow into something meaningful and powerful.
It would be an honor and a joy to collaborate with you someday, if the opportunity ever comes.
Wishing you endless inspiration and success in everything you create!
With warmest regards,
Luba Star
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