Great logline, Robyn. The ticking clock element and the prison connection create strong suspense. It clearly sets up high stakes before the wedding day. I’d definitely be curious to see how the tension unfolds in the screenplay.

Robyn Henderson I like the core idea here...the setup has strong tension, especially with the wedding deadline and someone from his past showing up. That part really works.

I did feel like the synopsis is trying to pack in a lot at once, which makes it a bit harder to follow on the first read. Some of the details (like the prison connection and identities) are interesting, but they come in so quickly that they slightly blur the main conflict instead of sharpening it.

Maybe try simplifying the flow a bit...focus on the con man, the target, the immediate threat, and the ticking clock. Once that’s clear, the twists will land even stronger.

Overall, the concept is solid, it just needs a cleaner, more direct presentation to really hit.

Thanks for the feedback Emmanuel Jomy. At times I see my feature growing to a series - there are so many moving parts. I will take on board your suggestions.