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Naïve consultant asked to ‘check for compliance’ for a multi-national organisation, wanting to impress her workaholic CEO, digs deeper than expected and reveals the organisation is money laundering, embezzling and two previous CFO’s have mysteriously disappeared.
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Love the premise Robyn Henderson - I would consider tightening this up to one sentence which is easily doable considering said premise. Consider adding the goal of the protagonist and and stakes. What happens if the protagonist doesn't achieve that goal?
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Amazing!
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