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Life sentences no longer exist. Depraved criminals are now subjected to a month's intense punishment in a prison staffed by sociopaths, and supported by a government who use this opportunity to test their new drugs and psychological treatments on those who'll just get abandoned to die in the middle of the Atlantic.
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Hi Fatem, your story is very interesting, but you need to work a little more on the logline. You left it very simple.
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