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OPERATION YGGDRASIL
By Eusebio De Sales
SYNOPSIS:
Short Synopsis: At last, humanity achieved its greatest technological creation: a massive network of colossal stations—each capable of housing life—launched across the solar system by NASA and the world’s leading tech powers. These stations form a vast web, perfectly synchronized with planetary motion, transforming the solar system into a living, breathing grid. This structure, named Operation Yggdrasil, is humanity’s new cosmic tree—connecting every world like roots through space. Now, the first wave of explorers—soldiers, scientists, doctors, and visionaries—are dispatched to investigate each planet and moon. Each world holds unimaginable mysteries. Each mission, a new adventure. ⸻ Why This Story and Why Now? In a time where humanity reaches for the stars but forgets to understand itself, Operation Yggdrasil invites us to reflect on what happens when our creations begin to reflect more than just our progress—they reflect our soul. This story blends ancient myth with futuristic ambition, speaking to the dreamer and the scientist alike. ⸻ Potential: Film | Anime series | Graphic novel | Video game franchise
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Operation Yggdrasil sounds intriguing and unique, Eusebio De Sales!
I suggest taking “OPERATION YGGDRASIL By Eusebio De Sales Genre: Sci-Fi, Adventure, Mystery Logline” out of the logline section. You could put “Genres: Sci-Fi, Adventure, Mystery” in the synopsis section. The title of your script and your name are under the picture.
I think your logline needs a better flow, and I think the end would be stronger if you told us what Operation Yggdrasil’s intention is (does it want to stop the explorers from investigating the planets, hurt them, etc.?).
Something like: Years (???) after humanity launched a grid of life-stations across the solar system, a crew of elite explorers investigates the planets for _______ (why they’re investigating)—unaware the grid is alive and trying to stop them.
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Amazing!! Thanks for the response mister Vaughan . I will make another one this the details you just told me to . I know the story needs more specifications, i want to learn how to make an exelent format of loglines so then i make the story that i want . Thanks againa i feel im getting much better because of you
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You're welcome, Eusebio De Sales. I'm really looking forward to watching this movie/series!
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