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CODENAME : AKLEROM
By Eusebio De Sales

GENRE: Sci-fi

LOGLINE: Codename: Aklerom The Light They Tried to Silence CHAPTER 1 – ORIGIN Before he had a name, he was light. He existed as pure energy—vast, radiant, unshaped—until the Source pulsed once… and Aklerom emerged. Born of a living field, Aklerom was the last-winged being of his kind, formed from Pleiadian essence. He was not human. He was not mortal. He was designed to remember. But memory… must be earned. CHAPTER 2 – INCARNATIONS Lemuria. His name was Gan. Second-in-command to the Lemurian King. He led the crystal warriors in the harmonic battles. Egypt. He was known as Akenaton—a solar pharaoh who defied all systems to elevate light. Sweden. He incarnated as Jean, a noble protector in the 1800s, quietly aiding the weak through intuition. Through every life, he carried fragments of light—but never the full code. Until now. CHAPTER 3 – THE COSMIC NAME Throughout the galaxy, his true name echoes: Aklerom. Even among stars and beings of the 12th dimension, he is known. A soul that once departed the Source surrounded by archangels, who wept as he accepted his first mission to Earth. He is not just a man. He is a return signal. CHAPTER 4 – THE MISSION TO SIRIUS Once, in a time before Earth knew war, Aklerom led the Comando Star during the Reptilian invasion of Sirius. The battle was brutal. He stood at the front—rescuing crystalline cities and seeding frequencies of light across dying worlds. He returned to Earth with invisible scars. And part of his light remained hidden ever since. CHAPTER 5 – THE FLAME & THE GUARDIANS His twin flame, Dermear, waits in the Pleiades. They have not touched in millennia, but she calls to him in dreams—activating buried light within him. Two Arcturian guides, Julius and Guvel, watch over him. They are not angels. They are frequencies wrapped in intelligence. And he is their priority. CHAPTER 6 – THE PROTECTION OF ARCHANGELS His greatest unseen protector: Archangel Michael. Bound to his field from the moment he left the Source, Michael’s presence shields Aklerom from true destruction. No force of darkness can fully end him. That is the law. CHAPTER 7 – EARTHBOUND In this life, he was born again—human in form, yet encoded with ancient frequency. But Earth is under surveillance. A system of control has learned to trace souls, not faces. The Reptilian Dome—a network of invisible frequencies—detects beings like him the moment they arrive. Aklerom was found. They sedated him. They rewrote his path. They hid him in plain sight. CHAPTER 8 – THE BUNKER Far beneath the Earth, he lies unconscious in a secure underground facility run by the most powerful governments. To them, he is Codename: Aklerom. Subject 001. “No wings. No resistance. But something protects him.” “We’ve tried. He cannot be killed.” “Every attempt triggers divine interference.” They created a new protocol: Let him live as a human. Give him bills. Pain. Doubt. Depression. Feed him distractions and keep him sleeping. Because if he wakes up… The system falls. Religion falls. Control ends. CHAPTER 9 – THE INTERVENTION But fate is not written by fear. Somewhere beyond time, a divine Legion watches. They do not often act. But now, the signal is active. A tremor shakes the bunker. Aklerom’s heart emits a pulse. The monitors blink. The room fills with white-gold light. Soldiers panic. And then… he is gone. In his place, a circle of scorched silver. On the wall, a message: “RETURNING.” Final Note He was not the first. And he will not be the last. Many are awakening. Many are remembering. And those who feel the light stirring within them know: Aklerom is real. And the silence is ending.

SYNOPSIS:

Synopsis – Codename: Aklerom In the deepest layers of a hidden global facility, a man lies sedated, monitored, and forgotten. His name is classified. His origin—unknown to the world. To his captors, he is simply Subject 001. To the universe, he is Aklerom. Aklerom is no ordinary man. Born from the Source as a winged Pleiadian being, he has lived countless lives—among them, a Lemurian warrior, an Egyptian king, and a noble protector in 1800s Europe. Yet in his current human form, he remembers none of this. Until now. A secretive system that rules Earth from the shadows has learned to trace souls, not just people. Using a frequency dome created by reptilian forces, they’ve intercepted powerful beings sent to help humanity—and neutralized them before they could awaken. Aklerom was among those targeted. But unlike others, his presence could not be erased. Attempts to harm him failed. His energy field activated divine intervention. So they took a different approach: let him live a broken life under illusion, weighed down by debt, failure, and emotional fog. As long as he doesn’t remember… the world stays asleep. But the soul cannot be caged forever. Through dreams, energy pulses, and mysterious guidance, Aklerom begins to awaken. Protected by higher-dimensional beings, guided by memories, and drawn toward a destiny greater than any government could imagine, he becomes the crack in the grid. And when he fully remembers who he is… The system falls. Religion falls. Control ends. Codename: Aklerom is a visionary sci-fi epic that fuses ancient spirituality, galactic history, and modern conspiracy into a single awakening. It is not just a story—it’s a message for those who have always felt they were meant for more.

Abdusamad Shafiev

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- Abdusamad Shafiev
2 months ago

Codename: Aklerom sounds interesting, @Eusebio, but your logline is really long.

Here’s a logline template that might help: After/when ______ (the inciting incident/event that sets the plot in motion), a _______ (the main flaw the protagonist has to overcome in the script or an adjective that describes the protagonist’s personality) _______ (the protagonist’s title/job/career) tries to/attempts to/fights to/struggles to/strives to/sets out to/fights/battles/engages in/competes/etc. _______ (goal of story and try to add the obstacles here) to/so/in order to ________ (stakes).

The inciting incident can also be at the end of the logline: A _______ (the main flaw the protagonist has to overcome in the script or an adjective that describes the protagonist’s personality) _______ (the protagonist’s title/job/career) tries to/attempts to/fights to/struggles to/strives to/sets out to/fights/battles/engages in/competes/etc. _______ (goal of story and try to add the obstacles here) to/so/in order to ________ (stakes) after/when ______ (the inciting incident/event that sets the plot in motion).

Loglines are one or two sentences. A one-sentence logline sounds better, and it takes less time for a producer, director, etc. to read it. Try to keep your logline to 35 words or less. Long loglines can make producers, directors, etc. pass on a project.

Avoid using “must” in loglines. “Must” usually means the protagonist is forced to do whatever they need to do in the story instead of doing it willingly. You might need to use “must” in a logline though, like when the protagonist is forced by another character to do something. Using “must” to choose between two options is fine.

Names in loglines are usually for biopics, well-known stories, and franchises (like Mission: Impossible).

Sometimes I put the location and date that the story takes place in instead of the inciting incident if it’s a Period Piece script.

All stories don’t follow this logline template. Biopics, documentaries, and Experimental scripts might not follow the template. The series logline for a TV show can follow this template, but the pilot logline and episode loglines for the show might not.

Eusebio De Sales

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- Maurice Vaughan
2 months ago

Thank youu!! I will work in every single thing you just told me . I will create another logline with your advice and ask you to see if i got better . Thanks again .

Maurice Vaughan