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ERA ZERO

ERA ZERO
By Mukhammed Ali Bolyspekov

GENRE: Fantasy
LOGLINE:

After resetting humanity to the Stone Age, a scientist attempts to create a new world alone.

SYNOPSIS:

Dr. Eli Mercer is a brilliant but undervalued theoretical physicist. His ideas are seen as too radical, his research too risky, and he himself is considered a paranoid loner. After a string of rejections, dismissals, and ridicule from his peers, Eli finds himself alone in his lab, with one last chance to prove his theory.

In a desperate bid to assert his relevance and outplay the system, Eli initiates an unauthorized experiment based on his theory of temporal collapse. But instead of a localized reaction, a global event unfolds: humanity is reset to zero. People all over the world lose their memory, language, culture, and knowledge — reverting to a primal, Stone Age state.

Waking up in an unfamiliar, wild world, Eli realizes he is one of the few who retained their memory and knowledge. Everything is gone: electricity, the internet, medicine, history — even language itself. The world has started over. And now, in Eli’s mind, he has a chance to do it right. If he caused the end of the old world, he will become the father of the new one.

Eli gathers a group of “cleansed” survivors — people learning to speak, think, and build from scratch. He teaches them fire, hunting, math, logic. He writes new laws, creates a primitive school, and holds the first public gatherings. He quite literally becomes the first chapter of a new civilization.

But no utopia survives under the rule of a single man. Soon, Eli encounters others who, like him, have retained their memories: the cold-minded bioengineer Rachel Quinn, the hardened military strategist John Slater, and the idealistic former politician Michael Harper. Each holds a different vision of what this new civilization should become.

Conflicts begin to rise. Some want to restore the old world. Others aim to build something new — but not the way Eli envisions it. Camps form. Ideologies clash. What began as a second chance for humanity becomes a battle over who gets to write its future.

The pilot episode ends with a chilling realization: Eli is no longer in control. He merely pushed the first domino. Now, Era Zero moves forward on its own.

Abdusamad Shafiev

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Mukhammed Ali Bolyspekov

Thank you so much for taking the time to check out Era Zero and for the generous 4.5 rating!

It really means a lot, especially as I’m just starting out in screenwriting.

I’d love to stay in touch and maybe hear more of your thoughts — I’m always looking to improve and connect with fellow writers.

Thanks again and all the best with your own projects!

Connor N. F. Field

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Connor N. F. Field

I love the concept, I think your logline could benefit from including some stakes, like why does he want to create a new world and such? The logline makes it appear that he is the last person on earth so some clarification of the overall plot could also prove beneficial.

Mukhammed Ali Bolyspekov

He wanted to create a time machine, but problems with funding at work began to threaten his project. In desperation, he decided to launch his unfinished machine, which led to a temporal collapse that sent him back to the Stone Age. No, he is not the last person on Earth—he ends up in a time when Neanderthals roamed the land. Now, he is forced to build a new civilization, as he is the only one left on Earth who possesses the knowledge of modern humanity. The future of civilization now rests in his hands.

Mukhammed Ali Bolyspekov

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