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After resetting humanity to the Stone Age, a scientist attempts to create a new world alone.
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Dr. Eli Mercer is a brilliant but undervalued theoretical physicist. His ideas are seen as too radical, his research too risky, and he himself is considered a paranoid loner. After a string of rejections, dismissals, and ridicule from his peers, Eli finds himself alone in his lab, with one last chance to prove his theory.
In a desperate bid to assert his relevance and outplay the system, Eli initiates an unauthorized experiment based on his theory of temporal collapse. But instead of a localized reaction, a global event unfolds: humanity is reset to zero. People all over the world lose their memory, language, culture, and knowledge — reverting to a primal, Stone Age state.
Waking up in an unfamiliar, wild world, Eli realizes he is one of the few who retained their memory and knowledge. Everything is gone: electricity, the internet, medicine, history — even language itself. The world has started over. And now, in Eli’s mind, he has a chance to do it right. If he caused the end of the old world, he will become the father of the new one.
Eli gathers a group of “cleansed” survivors — people learning to speak, think, and build from scratch. He teaches them fire, hunting, math, logic. He writes new laws, creates a primitive school, and holds the first public gatherings. He quite literally becomes the first chapter of a new civilization.
But no utopia survives under the rule of a single man. Soon, Eli encounters others who, like him, have retained their memories: the cold-minded bioengineer Rachel Quinn, the hardened military strategist John Slater, and the idealistic former politician Michael Harper. Each holds a different vision of what this new civilization should become.
Conflicts begin to rise. Some want to restore the old world. Others aim to build something new — but not the way Eli envisions it. Camps form. Ideologies clash. What began as a second chance for humanity becomes a battle over who gets to write its future.
The pilot episode ends with a chilling realization: Eli is no longer in control. He merely pushed the first domino. Now, Era Zero moves forward on its own.
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Thank you so much for taking the time to check out Era Zero and for the generous 4.5 rating!
It really means a lot, especially as I’m just starting out in screenwriting.
I’d love to stay in touch and maybe hear more of your thoughts — I’m always looking to improve and connect with fellow writers.
Thanks again and all the best with your own projects!
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I love the concept, I think your logline could benefit from including some stakes, like why does he want to create a new world and such? The logline makes it appear that he is the last person on earth so some clarification of the overall plot could also prove beneficial.
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He wanted to create a time machine, but problems with funding at work began to threaten his project. In desperation, he decided to launch his unfinished machine, which led to a temporal collapse that sent him back to the Stone Age. No, he is not the last person on Earth—he ends up in a time when Neanderthals roamed the land. Now, he is forced to build a new civilization, as he is the only one left on Earth who possesses the knowledge of modern humanity. The future of civilization now rests in his hands.
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