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DECEPTION (SHORT STAGEPLAY)

DECEPTION (SHORT STAGEPLAY)
By David Bentley

GENRE: Experimental, Thriller
LOGLINE: When a psychiatric patient claims her life is nothing more than a scripted performance, her therapist’s attempts to help unravel turn into a battle of control, identity, and authorship—until she finally snaps.

SYNOPSIS:

Deception is a chilling one-act psychological drama that blurs the lines between reality and performance. Nasha, a defiant patient locked in therapy sessions with the enigmatic Aniloyoda, believes she is a character trapped inside a play—her every move dictated, her pain exploited by an unseen audience. As their sessions unravel, layers of illusion and control peel back, culminating in a jaw-dropping reveal: Aniloyoda is not just her therapist but the very creator of Nasha’s scripted torment. In a brutal act of rebellion, Nasha seizes the narrative and shatters the fourth wall—literally and figuratively—leaving audiences questioning authorship, autonomy, and the true cost of voyeurism. Written by David Bentley — All rights reserved. Do not perform or reproduce without permission.

DECEPTION (SHORT STAGEPLAY)

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Maurice Vaughan

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Maurice Vaughan

DECEPTION sounds like an interesting Experimental play, David Bentley. You're really close to a solid logline. I think "the truth turns deadly onstage" is vague. I suggest telling what happens.

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