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The Falling of the Empire
After his brother is murdered, a former special ops soldier returns to a corrupt Miami and uncovers a conspiracy that controls the city from the shadows launching, a brutal war to burn the empire down from the inside.
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The Falling of the Empire is a franchise-ready, action-thriller epic with the emotional intensity of The Equalizer, the world-building of John Wick, and the political fire of Sicario.
Dez — a Black veteran turned underground hacker — is pulled back to Miami after the murder of his younger brother. But this isn’t just a crime. It’s part of a deadly political machine involving cartel money, police corruption, and military contractors gone rogue.
What starts as revenge turns into a revolution.
Featuring a diverse cast, cinematic set pieces, and a grounded emotional arc, this feature sets up a multi-film universe, with the sequel Empire Reborn: The Ghost Protocol already outlined — expanding into international warfare, AI surveillance, and a resistance movement led by the next generation.
This is more than a movie. It’s a global story about justice, legacy, and taking back power.
Written by Mytaesha Worth, The Falling of the Empire is ready to shake the industry.
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The Falling of the Empire sounds thrilling, Mytaesha Worth! I can’t wait to watch this! I suggest adding a comma before “launching” so the reader doesn’t get winded when they read the logline.
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thank you so much Maurice Vaughan gotcha I've sent the pitch to Toni bullock days ago pray she loves it means I've a great job took years of doing
You're welcome, Mytaesha Worth. I hope the pitch goes great!
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