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When twins MIMI & VITUS recite magical rhymes, a hidden wall opens into a wild world where emotions appear as magical characters, some helpful, some tricky. Each adventure begins in a new world with its own rules, and only their courage can guide them through.
SYNOPSIS:
Kick off on Day X. a date discussed in endless family meetings.
MIMI and VITUS, now officially school kids (not little ones anymore), are moving with their parents from their noisy city apartment to a quiet countryside house. Everyone’s expecting fresh air and new friends, but for MIMI&VITUS, way bigger things are about to change. That first night in their new home, a dream changes everything. A glowing wall. A voice. A rhyme whispered in the dark:
Silent Wall Silent Wall Take us to the Land Beyond Where time and space stand still Now and Then Till we meet again
Both kids wake up, say the rhyme out loud, at the exact same time. That’s the test. That’s what the wall was waiting for. When the wall glows for real, it pulls them into Adventureland, a hidden world where big feelings and everyday kid problems take magical shape. Some worlds are full of flowers, working Peas, clumsy Tooth Fairies. Also, there are helpful creatures like Queen K or King Laughter. Others? A little weirder, like floating through bubbles while chasing Flunkies who lie. And when the quest is done, and it’s time to go home, there’s a second rhyme:
Silent Wall Silent Wall We return from adventure’s call Space and Time, you may now spin We are Back home we will meet again
But it only works if both kids say it in unison — because every return depends on their bond and teamwork. Every mission has its own vibe. Every world has its own rule.
Every time, MIMI & VITUS return home with a surprise, something to help solve the very real challenge they faced back in the real world. This is the moment they stop being regular kids… and start becoming something else. Chosen ones. Adventurers.
No capes, no superpowers, just the courage to care, and a rhyme to get them there.
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