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GOOD
By Monte Albers de Leon
Hostage to AI amid apocalyptic chaos, Eli, Eva, and four colleagues attempt to save the world.
SYNOPSIS:
In a near-future Omaha, Nebraska, Nile.com workers Eva, Lily, John, AJ, Leo, and Eli face the relentless threat of AI replacing their jobs. Just as they contemplate unionizing to reclaim their future, an apocalyptic event turns their world upside down. In the ensuing chaos, they are thrust into a desperate struggle for survival. Amid the digital dusk, they embark on a gripping journey toward hope and redemption, where every choice can mean life or death.
GOOD
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I would avoid naming characters in a logline. "A group of disgruntled employees", or something along those lines, makes it easier for the reader. Otherwise, I think it's good, but a little vague. What do they have to do to save the world? Maybe that could be included (a slightly more specific goal).