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THE POISONOUS SMILE

THE POISONOUS SMILE
By Ahmad Shah Dilawari

GENRE: Other, Drama
LOGLINE: Logline: A determined young detective must face the darkest betrayal when her beloved husband—secretly a psychopathic serial killer—kidnaps her sister in a twisted obsession, forcing her to risk everything to save the only family who ever loved her.

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Written by: Ahmad Shah Delawari Date: May 21, 2025 Contact: ahmadshah.writer@gmail.com © All Rights Reserved Synopsis: The Poisonous Smile is a dark psychological thriller about two sisters—one adopted, one adored—whose childhood bond is tested by betrayal, obsession, and murder. Sophia, the adopted daughter, grows up in the shadow of her beautiful younger sister Lily, who receives all the affection from their emotionally distant parents. Despite the imbalance, Sophia and Lily form an unbreakable sisterly bond. Years later, Sophia becomes a dedicated detective. Lily, full of life and charm, attracts the attention of James—a charismatic man who appears perfect. But in a shocking twist, James marries Sophia instead of Lily, hiding his true, sinister motives. When a string of young women are found murdered, Sophia follows the trail of clues—only to discover that her husband is the killer. And worse: Lily is his latest captive. Now, Sophia must confront her worst nightmare. With her past traumas resurfacing and time running out, she must risk everything—her badge, her sanity, even her life—to stop James and rescue the only person who ever loved her. The Poisonous Smile is a slow-burning, suspense-filled thriller that delves into themes of identity, jealousy, family dysfunction, and the deadly consequences of hidden desires.

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