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Short Summary: When Fereshteh, the daughter of a powerful and wealthy doctor, falls in love with Raj, a humble taxi driver who once saved her father’s life, their romance sparks the wrath of Jago — the arrogant son of the richest man in the world. After a horrifying acid attack and a series of tragic events, Raj and Fereshteh flee the city. But Jago’s father, Deni, begins a relentless hunt for revenge. With the help of four loyal friends, Raj must wage a bloody battle to rescue Fereshteh, leading to a shocking final showdown — and a mysterious twist that leaves the door open for a thrilling continuation. Respectful Request to Producers and Filmmakers: My name is Ahmad Shah Delawari, the writer of this story. With deep respect, I sincerely invite all esteemed producers and filmmakers to collaborate with me on this project. I believe this story has the potential to become a powerful, emotional, and action-packed film, but without your support and guidance, I cannot bring it to life. Your collaboration is essential to turn this dream into reality, and I would be honored to work together. Copyright Notice: All rights to this work are owned by the author, Ahmad Shah Delawari. Any unauthorized copying, distribution, or use of this story is strictly prohibited and may result in legal action. Email: ahmadshah.writer@gmail.com Date: May 13, 2025
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BURNING LOVE sounds incredible and intense, Ahmad Shah Dilawari! And catchy title.
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"Thank you very much, Maurice Vaughan Maurice! Your kind words about Burning Love truly encourage me. I'm grateful for your support and would be honored to hear any feedback or advice you may have to help make this story even stronger. Looking forward to staying in touch!"
You're welcome, Ahmad Shah Dilawari. Have you thought about getting feedback on your script with Stage 32's feedback services? www.stage32.com/scriptservices Looking forward to staying in touch as well!
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Thank you so much for all your support and valuable suggestions, Maurice! I’m truly happy for your attention to my screenplay, and reviewing the Stage 32 feedback services has been very helpful to me. Your feedback means a lot to me, and I hope to continue benefiting from your experiences and insights. I sincerely appreciate you, and I’m eagerly looking forward to continuing our communication!"