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TOO LATE, I LOVE THE BLUE

TOO LATE, I LOVE THE BLUE
By Koby Nguyen

GENRE: Fantasy, Biography
LOGLINE: When a silent, mysterious being descends from the sky and lands naked in a field, he wanders through centuries as a quiet witness to humanity, observing, learning, and gently connecting, until, with the last living human gone, he returns to the sky, carrying our blue planet’s memory with him.

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A being from the sky, naked and silent, lands on Earth in a field of grass. A discreet spectator of humanity, he drifts through the centuries—observing, learning, writing, sketching—never truly forming bonds. A rare smile, a few words exchanged, a deep melancholy: he is the invisible witness to our world. At the end of time, when only one human remains, a fleeting friendship blossoms between them. When the last person finally passes away, the celestial being leaves as he came, taking with him the memory of our “blue.” Concept & Tone: • Explores time, solitude, and the fragile beauty of humanity. • Elliptical storytelling: fragments, memories, sparse voice-over, pure emotion. • Visual style: natural light, contemplative shots, gestures and glances more than dialogue. • Message: Maybe all of us, at some point, crossed paths with this silent witness—a messenger of human memory. • Title: “Too Late, I Love the Blue”—because there’s no one left to share this blue world. Originality: A visual poem about the passage of time, loneliness, and transmission—somewhere between minimalist sci-fi and a universal fable.

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Abdusamad Shafiev

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Leonardo Ramirez

I love the initial premise Koby Nguyen but I would consider adding a goal and some stakes. Great start!

Leonardo Ramirez

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Evelyn Von Warnitz

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Koby Nguyen

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Koby Nguyen

Thank you, Leonardo! The idea behind this short film isn’t necessarily to have a clear goal or a traditional story arc. It’s more about offering a unique vision—a poetic point of view on our existence and humanity. It’s meant to be a contemplative piece, inviting viewers to reflect rather than follow a conventional plot.

Banafsheh Esmailzadeh

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Banafsheh Esmailzadeh

I love this idea so much and would 1000% watch this.

Koby Nguyen

Thank you so much, Banafsheh! I really appreciate your support and enthusiasm for this idea. It means a lot to know that it resonates with you. I hope the film will touch you just as much when it comes to life!

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