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THE SHIP BEARING THE SUN
By Koby Nguyen
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In a desolate future, giant ships sail across a scorched desert, carrying the last reserves of water and a solar globe, a weapon powered by sunlight. Light has become both control and salvation. As the oppressed rise up, the ruling elite would rather destroy the water than relinquish their power. A visually haunting allegory of justice denied, human silence, and irreversible sacrifice, told in a brutal, poetic black-and-white universe.
THE SHIP BEARING THE SUN
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really want so see this movie…
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Minh Koby
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Unique concept, Koby Nguyen! I think "the ruling elite would rather burn everything than lose control" is vague. I suggest changing that to the protagonist and his/her goal in the story.
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